I do believe I very nearly cried. I am currently rereading the third and you did an awesome job tying in your fiction to the story.

Your story is awesome! I can't believe I just found it. You did an amazing job at putting those parts together! I hope you write more fics like this.

This was weird. Seriously, it was.

But still good. I love the part of her dreaming what's happening in the books.

Still, I cannot think anything else but that Daine could never be happy without Numair.

*gasp *tear * AWESOME

Aww... sweet and sad . Very well done

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Wah love fic Very very neat... and great job. Like the AU idea of it! Very cool

That...that was great! A cool idea. And done perfectly-especially the parts where Alanna dies and Daine finds Numair's grave. Depressing.

i can't believe i haven't reviewed this, b/c ive definetly read and reread this story many times

i love this story so much, it's probably one of my favourites.

ur good

i like it, however it is to sad.

I like the story. I would like it very much if you would write more for it.

That was good...sad but it was good sad! It's awesome that skill when u can change people's emotions with a few chosen words...keep on going!

that is realy good..in its own way...I realy don't know what to say about it...love sucks...Do your plot bunnies threaten? mine do?

wow...powerful...sad.

This is so sad! Wonderfully written. Excellent job!

However, don't you think that Daine's father would have intervened if Sarra had tried to get remarried, even if she had to? Obviously he still exists, as Daine retains part of her magic... or am I just very confused? :)

Omg! Wow. This SUCKS! OMG!

Okay, let me clear this up a bit more: Your story ROCKS. The fact of Daine never meeting Numair, never coming to Tortall sucks.

Wow...too horrible to imagine. *Runs away and hides*

...the bandits were important after all.