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| Dark1 2007-09-22 ch 2, anon. | abuseLoved it! Update soon! |
| Lady Aphadriel-order of the... 2007-02-18 ch 2,  | abuseI just found this, and it is good. I like where you were going with it. Just thought I'd let you know even though it looks like you aren't going to update again. Please update! |
| o'nika auguste 2006-09-13 ch 1, anon. | abusewhen is this story going to be finished it wasgetting interesting so far it's great. hope to see it finished. |
| RAMBO112 2006-08-04 ch 2, | abuseOMG i like your story..i know its been like a year since u updated but i really like it. please update...4 me> |
| paper mate 2006-02-23 ch 2, anon. | abuseYour girls are afraid to leave the institute cause they think they'll lose their commander. I say, they should kidnap him and set up a new private elite secret society of mutants for the seeking of personal pleasure. |
| mcgirl 2005-10-15 ch 2, anon. | abuseplease continue |
| bob 2005-08-11 ch 2, anon. | abusegood story so far, just remember not to write in slang ("b4"), and that "auburn" is a shade of red, while xnea has dark brown hair. |
| Miss American Pie 2005-05-10 ch 2, | abuseThis is pretty good, I have to say, I like it. Good job. You're into Angel as well? I'm glad, thanks for the review! I'm sorry if you cried. |
| Cheetah Princess 2004-10-22 ch 2, | abuseah! update again soon please! good story i like it. |
| Aragorn's little girl Ser 2004-06-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story! You asked me if you could use the last line of my story The next generation. Yes you can use it I have no problem with it. |
| Mrs-Spacemonkey-Jackson 2004-05-11 ch 2, | abuseAwesome! I hope you update soon! |
| Sarah 2004-04-07 ch 2, anon. | abuseYou must continue with this. I really miss Hercules and Xena since they went off. It's a shame that the producers didn't cross the shows more often. Hope to see the next chapter soon. |
| Xedra 2004-03-23 ch 2, | abuseI can see great potential in your writing. Just clean it up a little with the advice already mentioned. Iolaus's reaction is terrific! Would love to read the rest. :) |
| BekaJWP 2004-03-07 ch 2, | abuseLOL his reaction to her new outfit, so right ^_^. No idea as to the download, sorry! Keep writing :) |
| Indy Croft 2004-02-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseMORE! |