That was a beautiful story!

So sad an he was so faithful and cute. * cries*

... thats so sweet. im reading the Genbu Kaiden series right now... i think it will have Suzuno, Tatara, and the Genbu priestess and the guy she loves...

i relly liked this
Tatara is one of my favrite characters and you just wrote this like i thiught he would act like
this is really good

I love Tatara/Suzuno pairing , and i liked the way you ended this.
*Can't stand the fact that couples can't be together* -_-

Oh my God... I am do depressed now... That was so sad and so sweet! Thank you for writing that... even though now I am very sad...
-LS

hmm, this one is nice and tragic. u take it from tatara's POV. i don't like the byakko no seishi but it'll be a nice fic for tatara fans. perfect grammar! try post it on a byakko site?)

Aw, that's so sweet! They finally get to be together! Heck, who am I kidding. This isn't too good, but it is worth reading.