I found this today, and I must say I liked it.

I know it's been two years or so since you've updated this story, and that chances seem slim of you continuing, but I would really love to see how this turns out. It's got such great potential that it would be an enormous shame if it never got a chance to show off everything it could be.

I hope you return to this tale. It really is original.

Please don't give up.

O! So cool...bulma is acting ooc to vegesta's face..but is it just a facade...i think it is. I like this story. I really do. Hmm,...'inticing jealously...i have a feeling where this is going..AND I LIKE IT..i am a very ig b/v fan...TRUST me on that...and i do think this is gonna end up b/v..if it doesn't..oh well. You're the author..not me..and i'll like it anyway.

i'm bawling like a baby...well...ok so i'm being dramatic. but i am tearing up..i just cant picture bulma rejecting vegeta...FOR YAMCHA...
but i trust you..and something tells me this really is a b/v. ...but don't get me wrong... i really like this story..

o damn bulma...that was harsh...

i was about to cry...when i started sniffling my brother said i had problems and accused me of being too emotional...just cuz i realy like this story.

o...wha's gonna happen...i'm going on to read the next chapter...cuz i am lovin this story..

This is a really good and interesting story! I really do hope u intend to finish it! plz update soon!

i want Vegeta back! good plot!

good story i like it espeicaly about vegeta actualy destroys buu. and every thing else

Wow. This was awesome! And it's only the prologue! You definately had Vegeta perfectly in character. It's so sad that he doesn't want to go back and that he gave his chance at life to Goku! So sweet...Poor Trunks and Goten though, and Bulma...I know that this is gonna be an awesome fic, mainly beacuase the prologue is so amazing! You're definatley going on my author alert list! I'll keep an eye out for the first chapter! ^_^
~Ryu

Wow, I cant believe this doesn't have more reviews! That was so sad, but it was awesome! Sorta happy/sad thing going on. I actually cried.. I love it! I really think you had Vegeta's character perfect. It was so cute when he told Goku to tell Bulma he loved her! Great work! Please continue!

Gods! Taking Vegeta out of the picture again. I just can't take it...good writing though. I will be watching for the next update.