I really like your story I hope to see other good work soon.

Wow. Brilliant.
That was the best Matrix's fanfic I've ever read. The whole plot is very realistic and seems to fill all holes in Kid's Story.
I really liked the story, I'm going to add it to the "Favorite Stories list" ;* great job.

Kid poses questions that never get answered, or ever really noticed, in the Matrix trilogy. The idea that someone can self-substantiate, can wake up purely of their own will, is an awesome concept, and it's a pity the Wachowskis never delved into it. Really, what Kid does might almost be what happened to the first One, if there ever was a first.
Thankyou for providing another side to this, for adding depths previously ignored. The similarities drawn between Neo and Kid work well, as does the suggestion that Neo was remarkable from the very beginning - with the Sight.

The small details like "although Neo had a feeling this had more to do with its current lack of Trinity than anything else" are familiar, and it's easy to settle in comfortably with your style of writing.
I'll look forward to more from you.

This was amazing. The best Kid story I've ever read.

Absoultely amazing. I love the way how you add "more" to "Kid's Story". The dialogue was great. Young Neo is adorable. You've captured his innocence and naiveness very well.
I like how Neo just KNEW that Kid was alive. Funny how Neo did so much to free a person that later on becomes a huge pain in the **.
Brilliant writing.

Wow!
That was F*ing AMAZING!
A very powerful piece, I love your style of writing!
Well done!
Write more!
Oh, please, write more!
Naz x