hello there,

I read this a long time back in '05 before I had the courage to write even. Still beautiful now as it was then...at least now I don't have to 'lurk' _

hugs and much love

zan

::hugs:: that was beautiful! thank you for sharing it!

This is just a beautiful piece. So nice to see a peaceful moment for these four, and I love the thought of Sanzo singing! Lovely!

wow! lovely lovely! and a surprise to think that it would be those three to sing, and not the one in the driver's seat... good job, am putting this in the faves list.

Yes. Finally. I've been waiting forever_
This story was very sweet and a little sad.
"And then his heart was torn out, and any music that might have been within him was lost together with his humanity."
I wish I could hear them sing that improvised tune. I wish Hakkai could sing too.
Please write more soon.

*pulls jaw off of floor* that's gorgeous. Utterly gorgeous! What a novel idea...and I love how you worded your paragraphs.
Beautifully done!

So glad you decided to post this, Naye. On second reading, I like it even better than the first time. Such a sweet and different look at these four. And yet another insight into Hakkai's soul. More, please. _

you posted it! _
really very sweet moment...

hello, I'm shora, and a great fan of saiyuki. I wanted to complement you on your story, it flowed beautifully and complemented the characters. _ nice job.