Great story. But it felt more like a romance story than action. We all knew Schaft was behind the murder, but 'why' still remains largely unanswered (besides the known fact that Schaft wants to get rid of Shinohara). The battle between the three sides was definitely the highlight of the story. I loved it. There are small things like 'then' instead of 'than', 'their' instead of 'there'. But other than that, it's a story well written.

Great story. Nice to see everything works out nicely in the end ;)

A very cool story, nice interaction between characters. Keep up the good work!

Even I never liked sugary endings or Asuma/Noa pairings, this story moved me so much that I stayed up to read it. now it's in my fav list and you are my fav writer, this is so welldone that, it's up to a real TV serie standard. wow! I hope to read more Patlabor fics from you

I really enjoyed reading your storey. The referances to things that had happend in the series was great, especally when Takeo tells wong about throwing Ohta out the window. I love that ep.

Your storey line was good too. Shaft getting "help" from certain police was a good idea.

wow, What can I say this was really a good read, I enjoyed every bit of it. Although the way Takeo discovered Noa and Asuma was a bit hap-hazzard but did not spoil it but I liked it :) hope to read a sequal *cough* hint *cough*

Good story! Not enough Patlabor fics out there. Thanks for writing a compelling story.

I like this story! The ending is cute! - You don't have to do a sequel. If your heart's not into the story, then nothing'll be accomplished. Trust me on that one. ;; I probably sound like some idiot now... ;; Well, great story! -

that was a great story even if it took you extremely long to write it completely

OR I loved the story, and I am grateful that you divided the fic in chapters.

_ very nice last 2 chapters. i actually thought for a moment that noa MIGHT BE dead..but then was like-he cant do that to asuma with his history, now can he? he might. hmmm...-but she wasnt. its nice to that i got to read the end so soon aft i read the prior chaps, nice luck. well hope you write more patlabor fics since there really isnt any out there (that i know of-i dont know why patlabor isnt popular either, its one of my favs)and more importantly -youre stories kick ass. thanks.

another kick ass fic by the same jawsome patlabor fiction writer. really nifty story. ah, and it has to end on such a cliffhanger too. i really cant wait for more.

Great fic, this series is just beggining in my country but I love it. Anyways you should divide it in chapters, this would make it easier to read. I hope you continue makeing fics of this great anime.

I love u'r story, it's so well writen and u definently protrayed the characters perfectly! Write some more, soon! U'r gonna be on my fave stories list for sure! _ Noa and Asuma make a great couple, they're fun to read!