I would love to see your sequel, particularly if a very handsome lawyer is in it (hint! hint!). Even if he isn't (sigh! sigh! sob!).

I'm sorry Sair had to leave, but maybe it's for the best until she can find the peace she needs. This was excellent. I'll miss Dorian in the sequel unless somehow he can come back. . .

I didn't expect Mina to die quite so easily and I'm rather sad that she did. I also didn't expect Dorian to leave the mortal coil, but he left it in an evil manner. So now we need to save Sair from the pain and from the evil essence of Dorian (the two beams of light?).

You know, I tried to review this chapter like 5 times, but my stupid computer wouldn't let me. Grr! Stupid computer! Hm, I didn't know you don't accept anonymous reviews. You really should, you'll get more reviews that way. Just my opinion.

Anyway, oh, poor Sair! She's all Dorian-esque! Just curious though, can she now tollerate sunlight since bursting into flames wouldn't kill her? I kinda liked the ending, it was sweet, and semi-cliffie-ish. [Which is a technical term, mind you.] Hm... you know what would've been a good name for the sequel instead of "Perfect Imbalance 2"? I like "Imperfect Balance" which is like "Perfect Imbalance" but flip-flopped! Anyway, are there going to be any LXG characters in the sequel? [I'll still read it even if there's not, but I just wanna know.] Any-who, I loved this fic! Congrats on finishing it and good luck with the sequel!

-Krisian-

Well, I guess the ending was okay, except that YOU KILLED MINA! Sorry, I just happen to be a bigger LXG fan than I am an Angel fan (though I still love it) and i was so hoping that she would turn good again and help kick Dorian's butt. Interesting twist on the end, turning Sair immortal. Congrats on finishing the story. Keep up the great work!

YAY! Dorian Grey finally DIED...I thought he would never leave. I swear that he got into my room sometime last week and was bragging about how he was going to kill Angel and Spike! I don't really give a damn about Spike (sorry, I don't like him very much) but I care a heck of a lot about Angel and so I threatened to beat the daylights out of him with my trust silver shovel that I like to hit people with...obviously...and that I didn't care that he was immortal because I'd just keep hitting him until I got tired. Than I'd hire someone to take over for me...preferably Gunn.

By the way...what DID you do to Sair? Will she be OK...along with Spike, who is currently unconcious. I know I said I do't like Spike very much but I can still be a compasionate person and ask how he's doing! I CAN BE CARING TOO! And don't make Dorien come back to life or else I will have to hit him repeatedly over the head with the aformentioned Silver Shovel. Oh yeah...and before I forget...make a Sequel. I like sequels...you shall be going on my Fav. Authors list for this story, sister. Update soon!

*gasp* So, THAT'S how you kill an immortal. Whoa. Eek! Mina... is... is... gone. How DARE you! She wasn't evil, she just needed a good whack on the head with a crowbar or something. That would've done it! _ Oh my! WHAT DID YOU DO TO SAIR? *freaks out for a moment* Ahem.. ok. I'm fine now... sorta. @_@ What was that Dorian gave her anyway? The Ring of Power? Hehehe. Just kidding - though that would make in interesting crossover in it's own right. Oh no! The end is near! *picks up random picket sign that says "The End Is Near" and runs around* The end is near! Can you feel it? Hehehe! Ok, enough of my foolery. I'm going to leavie you to writing the end of this loverly fic, and a sequel would be cool, but what would be your plot device since you just killed the plot device[s] for this one off? Eh... just asking! Happy writing!

-Krisian-

Great chapter! The fight was written incredibly well! - but where did Spike go? *gasp* I never saw him!

Update soon! {Please!}

A. Lynne

please don't kill Spike! I have no problem with you killing Sari, but not spike. And when's Mina gonna get good again? anywho, keep up the great work, and update soon.

Oh. My. Gosh.

I HATE YOU FOR LEAVING OFF RIGHT THERE! My poor Spike *sniffles*...

UPDATE SOON! Or I will conjure up my own Dorian to come after you! Mwahahahaha!

A. Lynne

GAH! ANOTHER cliffie? Curse you! Grr! and Rar, too! Hm... I suppose I should take all of this anger out on evil Dorian instead... c'mere evil Dorian! *evil Dorian studiously ignores me* Humph. Fine.

Anyway, another great couple of chapters! Oh no! Spike! Don't die Spike, for that would be sad! I know, set Dorian on fire! [Hehehe, I'm a bit of a pyromaniac.] Well, it's gotta hurt, and it'll slow him down for a little.

Mina really needs to stop being brainwashed. *grabs Mina by the shoulders and shakes her* Snap out of it Mina! You don't love Dorian! SNAP OUT OF IT! Fight for the good guys again! [I still like my idea of Mina being the one to take Dorian out!]

Yes! Well, I loved it. You seem to have a good sense for swordplay scenes. Go you! Update now! Go!

Krisian

Why does someone as beautiful as Dorian have to be so evil? Anyway, doesn't anyone know about the picture? Someone (probably Spike, as he's Sair's brother) needs to find it and destroy it.

Huh...that's IT? THAT"S AN [exploit deleted] CLIFFIE! I HATE CLIFFIES DAMMIT! This is so good...I'm putting it on my favorites list. Since you seem to know so much about Angel...I was wondering if you could read my story that's a VanHelsing/Angel crossover and give me a little information on Spike. I don't know that much. Thanks...and update soon!

Whoa. Nice going with the head thing. I always wondered if that would work or not. Can't wait to see what's next. Keep up the great work and update soon.

And now, a line from the movie Hercules: "Would you forget the head-slicing thing?" Hehehe - that reminded me of the movie "The Faculty" with Elijah Wood when the teacher gets her head sliced off and it just sort of crawls back on. Ugh... *shudder* Right, anyway...

A CLIFFHANGER? How DARE you! No! I hope Sair kicks Dorian's butt royally! *waves flag* Go Sair!

You must update! I must know what happens!

Krisian