interesting fic, can't wait to finish reading it.

I really like this story. Especially the part in ch. 4 where Gourry woke up to save Lina even though he had those six sleep spells casted on him. I also like fact that Amelia and Zelgadis are going to get married.

Please UPDATE!

Kewl story, I can't wait to read more of it. There are so many different possiblities for this story.

These poor guys! You really have a twisted mind, you know. These poor kids don't know what they're getting into, it's better that way, I guess. Course, nor do I, until I read that prophesy... Wonderful story development, terrific pacing (slow but sure), dialogue that says Slayers'. I await the continuation with bated breath!

Great fight scenes and snappy verbal assults and interactions. Carry on...

This chapter was filled to over-flowing with goodies. Your treatment of Gourry with Lina was very touching. As in the series, they have a special commection, but retarded sexual urges, which is just fine and dandy since they aren't grown-ups! I found Zel's open chat with the castle guard delightfully funny, since in the manga he's more or a brash kid and here he's learned a few of life's lessons and is growing up- less angsty. Amelia seems unchanged, which is perfectly fine. Xelloss. What can I say? He's every bit as charming and secretive as he should be. I liked the telling-off he gives the snooty Martina and Filia. Luna and Naga- I find them great fun to mess with too! More...

This series was so good I just rushed through and read it all- no reviews. Now, I shall read and tell you how much I like it. You've probably started a new 'creation myth' for Xelloss, which is logical, surprising, and all-together delicious. Wunderbar!

I really like this! The interaction between the characters is good, and it sound slike a great adventure. The Z/A interaction is very realistic, and I like you xellos back story. I will have to finish reading this tonight.

This is definitely one of the best Slayers fics I've read. Everyone is perfectly in-character, and I really like the tangled web of motivations they're following (especially Luna and Xelloss). Please keep up the great work!

Wow this is great. This is awesome. This is... is... to good for me to say how good it is!

I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it!

Please write more! I'll wait for it! *sits and begins waiting and waiting...*

Sweet... Good stuff. I must say that I like it so far. Is it just me or do I smell a Xel/Luna pairing? Maybe I'm just fishing, but that would be interesting because it's almost never been done. Write the next chapter soon.

Now this is what I call an excellent story! The pace is great, the characters are all acting like their hilarious selves, and the plot is wonderful. I'm very impressed with the way you explained the creation and purpose of Xelloss, and the relationship of Gourry and Lina. I just cannot wait to read more of this; it has definitely become one of my favourites already! Bravo!

Ahhh! Sooooo awesome! My favorite Slayers fic ever! AND it has Xel/Fil! Why haven't you continued yet? Please, please, PLEASE continue! Sooon! _

Please, please continue this! It's too good to allow to die!

please continue