figured i'd tell you i like your story, it's better than alot of boring stories i have been reading lately.. eh, oh well. happy,if not late, new year.

Amazing story. It's not so bad as i thought it would be (sweatdrop)Anyway. YOu got to get the othet chp up i todaly whant 2 read it !

Hey I was looking around and i found your story i Love it you have to Write another Chapter ASAP!

Please use paragraphs. Since ff.net has that nice little QuickEdit feature now, those are easy to put in, and they make a fic a lot more readable.

please continu
i realy like it

Ok, I've got ur message, its good to know.
Great stories, keep writing. And I'll read them as soon as I get the chance, but u've got to tell me u've got them up! Don't forget!
And keep reading my stories, and suggestions please, I'll give them too you as soon as you want them, all u need to do is ask, so do ask!
Love ur stories, good luck.

Don't worry i do the same thing sometimes. however I am a few chapters ahead in my stories. I think that you did a good job on this chapter. I look forward to reading what you do next time.

Good, very. And hurry up with the next chapters! I've waited too long.
And, u don't seem to be very happy with me today. Why? U know I want to be ur friend, so would u accept me? Tell be as soon as u get the chance. And, do u like my story really? Tell the truth please. Its really important to me. And if u have any thing to say about it, then tell me. I WANT u to read the other bit I wrote, so will u please do this for me? I've also started on another story, the first pg was written by Blackie which I then worked on and now its about 4 pages long, if u want, you can ask to read it. Thank you, I NEED someone to read what I write, and I don't want to post them up, so I'd be VERY happy if u would do this for me, as a friend (I hope we are friends).
Thank u. This means alot to me. Really.
Greenie.
P.S. The story's really good, tell me as soon as u've got another chapter up.

I REMEMBER THIS PART IN THE STORY
I LOVE IT
HE IS GOING TO GET HER BACK RIGHT
OH AND ITS COLOMBIA NOT COLUMBIA THAT S HERE IN THE USA
IM TALKING ABOUT SOUTH AMERICA

Beautiful, loved it. Could u PLEASE keep writing things like this? PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!
can't wait for ur next chapters, this is my favourate story of urs.
Thank u, and do keep writing!

I think that it's at least fairly interesting. I look forward to reading the next chapter. I've got to go. I have work to do and a movie to watch. Arigato and ja ne!

sniff sniff
that was so nice and nice
i cant wait till u write more

Great shouting match u've got there. Anyway, I liked it, AND I've waited so long for it, so I'm glad that it was worth it. I don't know how u came up with all that, but I liked it, alot (apart from all the swearing, sorry, but I'm kind of against rude words and signals).
Do keep writing, and I'll keep reading - and writing reviews of course, so we'll both be happy!
Oh, and just to answer ur question about the best moments always being spoilt - Yes, it is; or atleast at the best of times.

I Don,t like it
I LOVE it
NIce Cool that her prents are ganters and all but at the sametime its sad
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
please dont make mw beg anymore

Hola que pasa well i just have to say that i like your story hope to see more chapters well later
good luck