lol! is good very nice but the last one was a bit of a puzzler, because i couldn't tell who was speaking err riku or what... yes i know it's centred on riku but err... -scratches head- yes anyway. keep writing! :D

These short stories are very well-written. They all have very unique plots and are very touching. Great job. _

I loved the ambiguity(sp?) of the first 2/3 but the story didn't feel as strong once names were mentioned. imo, being a fanfic in a specifically named fandom, you didn't need names at all.

I love this the language is so poetic and the ribbon is sweet

Wow that was really really good. I liked your use fo language. The way it followed was like I was reading Poetry. It created a warm and fuzzy feeling in me at the end of it.

Very kawaii stories. Can't wait for the next one.

Cute story! I enjoyed it a lot.

wow cool chapter hope to read ur other chapter son! plz update!

It annoys the hell out of me when people think saying "I love you," will make everything perfect, so I was nodding to everything Riku thought. *laughs*
I thought your characterization of Riku was dead on - the tone of this had the kind of down to earth wryness, and sensibleness I associate with her, but at the same time she /is/ in love, and she has a romantic side too. _. And Daisuke was as sweet as ever.
All in all, it left me with a rather nice WAFFY feeling, but not as if I had overdosed on sugar. And that is a rare rare thing.

Great writing! I had fun reading it. I really liked how you started it (Risa gushing over the TV, Riku's contemplation). Great stuff. Awesome job!

Gah, the cuteness! It's-it's-OVERWHELMING! And it's especially freaky because I just finished re-reading the St. White's Day arc! Wonderful work, and a pleasure to read!
sage

i liked it, it was a sweet story (how can you don't like Daisuke right? ).
But still, being romantic as I am, i think that you could have Riku and Daisuke confessing their love... consider continuing this story!
Well, keep up the good work!
_Cosmik_