I had been referenced this fanfiction while browsing on deviantART and couldn't help my curiousity but to check it out.

Completely, stupedously, brilliantly marvelous.

I love how there is an explanation to how the 'mpreg' actually works, and the way Kakashi, pervert that he is really /does/ try to make Iruka happy, and take care of things. And his horrible timing. And the way he scares Sasuke and Naruto shitless with his 'overly enthusiastic' attutide as a mental warfare weapon.

I also really apreciated all the little quirks and sitiuations in the story that made me laugh so hard that my dad looked over at me from watching tv on the couch and asked what was wrong.

There have been a couple of times when I've noticed that your grammar/punctuation was a little off, but I am a little OCD about such things anyways.

It's a very amazing work, and I sincerely can barely contain my excitement for the next chapter.

~NeverSilenced

Love the story, I hope you will continue the chapters to finish it.

Poor Iruka I love this story its really good!

I must admit I don't like Mpreg. I DO love this story however. To the point where I stayed up til 4 in morning last night reading it haha. I'm looking forward to your update whenever it may come. Happy Halloween! :D

wow, i don't know how i missed the fact that there are 23 chapters instead of 20...for some reason i just stopped at 20 last night. oops. anyway, i was delighted this morning to discover that there were 3 more to be read! yippe! anyway, from reading all your author's notes from when the chapters were posted, i'm sorry that you've had such trouble with adolescents whining for updates...let me put this as delicately as possible. -ahem- if at any point in the future you should somehow find the motivation to finish this story, in spite of the long hiatus, i would be exceptionally delighted. there we go...hopefully that was tactful enough. oh and i loved it, by the way. such a great story. fantastic job! -OA

So I realize that you haven't updated this in multiple years, and that makes me very sad because I read this entire story in one sitting and absolutely ADORE it!- but anyway, I just wanted to tell you that I'm a fan and I thought it was fanastic and 90% in-character and everything! Great job!

-OA

chapter 7 made want to die cause i was laughing so hard. other than the jutsu, i can actually see that happening in real life. it was hard to get air in my lungs. thank you for the laugh.

I'm loving this so far! The way you have the character is totally perfect. I can't wait for more!

OH! This is Wonderful! Please continue writting this story.
Looking forward to new chapters (hopefully).

I am delighted to have gotten to read this story of yours. Thank you for all of your hard work and gloriously long, character-driven chapters! I am particularly impressed that you continued to write so well under such duress. Finally getting a look inside Kakashi's head this chapter broke my heart a little. Since this was last updated in 2005, I'll just have to imagine for myself how and when and under what circumstances Kakashi finally gets to propose (both the best and worst case...) This is definitely going in the reread file. Thank you again. I'll have to look at the rest of your writing. :)

I love this story! Normally I'm not a fan of Mpreg, but you actually made it believable, Not to mention hilarious. ^_^

This is one of the best stories I've read here. Not a pairing that I usually favor, but the summary was catching. Expected a level of absurdity, but you make the premise believable and incredibly touching. This is more than fluff, it's truly romantic. I'm thoroughly enjoying the depth of the characters and complications of gender-identity crises, pregnancy, and relationships. This is very well done, can't wait for more. THANK YOU.

It's hard to think of words for this story without launching into squeals of fangirl madness. This is so well written and in character that it makes sense. (It that comment itself makes sense ^-^). I'm still not sure if I really like the Kakashi and Iruka romantic pairing since there is too much weak wimpy Iruka but I love how you kept Iruka strong, even with the sexy no jutsu and pregnancy. Great job. I'm going to check out your other works. I've added this story to my alerts in case real life ever calms down and your inspiration returns.

If this was written any other way, I wouldn't like it all (Kakashi x Iruka isn't my favorite pairing). But your writing is hilarious! I'm definitely reading more.

Hi. I noticed that you have not finished your master piece and I thought it would be nice if you knew how terrific your story is. So I decidd to post this. I hope your housing situation has gotten better. For certain I hope that you are have recieved a better paying job so that you don't have to work one full time and two part time ones just to pay for your house. Why don't you sell copies of your story. I know I would pay at least $50 for what you have written. When it is finished I would probly pay $100. Is there a way that your fans could commision you to finish your wonderfull work, or is that frowned upon? What about paying to print your story out? I just figured that is great as your story is you have got to have a large fan base that would be willing to pay a price to help you be able to wrtite and still pay the bills. Thanks for the read. I love it. Yours is the first story like this that I ever became addicted to. Good luck with everything.