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| The Oracle Dragon 2007-07-16 ch 12, | abusegreat story! predators and coffee don't mix! its funny though! Great STORY! I LOVED IT! |
| That Random Predator 2005-07-21 ch 3, anon. | abuseHehehe... Never give yautja coffee. |
| Nani Coen 2005-02-20 ch 1, | abuseI remember reading this story before. I loved it then, and i still love it now! Great job! |
| SoftMynx 2004-11-28 ch 2, | abuseLOL @ "review it or I will hunt you down!" I was hooked on this fanfic from the first chapter. I'm glad I don't have to go to work tomorrow or I'd be asleep at my desk from staying up and reading this all night. I even found myself laughing out loud in certain places. BTW, was Jason getting excited when he eyed the female predator Essra in this chapter? |
| Quillian 2004-10-26 ch 1, | abuse~ Hi, This is Kraeg001, now known as Quillian. Some idiot got my original account axed, and as a result, all the reviews I left for this story are gone, along with my stories and the reviews that went with them. Gr… If you’d like me to review all the chapters of this story again, just say so and I’ll do so! (Of course, I might not have reviewed this story at all, but then again, I don’t remember all the stories I’ve reviewed.) In the meantime, please consider this a sort of “votive review. |
| Dusta2002 2004-10-25 ch 11, | abuseAs with the rest of the story great humour and attention to the little details. I really need to get around to reading all of your stories and will do, however long it takes me! Keep up the wonderful and entertaining work. Dusta2002, |
| Josh 2004-10-21 ch 12, anon. | abuseHey great story and i'm looking forward to reading the sequal and then the thrid one after it. |
| Serpentnaeco 2004-10-20 ch 6, | abuseWow, detailed and plenty of action involved... have to continue reading it... |
| WhiteWizard101 2004-09-10 ch 12, | abuseThis is probably the greatest Alien/Predator fic ever written |
| Lady Discord 2004-09-05 ch 12, | abuseThis is indeed a very interesting story. Great plot. I love the idea of Humans and Predators working together. Well done! |
| Ariyana 2004-09-01 ch 12, | abuseThat was great I am going to read the sequel right now! Man that was way better then AVP the movie. You got skills! |
| Ariyana 2004-09-01 ch 10, | abuseI know I said I would review for the last chapter next but What? King? That's news to me! This is great I am really enjoying myself. I am putting all three of your stories on my favorites list because if the other two are as good as this then they are the bomb! |
| Ariyana 2004-09-01 ch 8, | abuseI have never played the Aliens vs Predator game so I am unfamiliar with some of the characters..but I got to tell you that this fanfic is much better then the AVP the movie. It had a couple of good actions scenes but overall it was CRAP! I am loving this so far, I loved the thing in chap 5 where the predator lifted a 20lb weight on a caffeine high. That was funny and all th action is awesome. I am impressed. Well I am off the finish this fic. I'll review again in the last chapter. |
| Barney Calhoun 2004-08-25 ch 12, anon. | abusei got one thing to say... GREAT ACTION-PACKED STORY!! I LOVED IT!! |
| Ariyana 2004-08-15 ch 1, | abuseI just wanted to say that I am planning on reading all three of your works just give me sometime. I am interested to see the storylines you have come up with for this franchise. |