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| cally777 2006-12-19 ch 1,  | abuseI agree its sometimes better not to finish a sex scene. Teasing is good. I like this part of the story best I think. |
| SkyMaiden 2006-01-04 ch 1, | abuseWoah another awesome story. i swear you're one of the best Rikku/Paine writers on. |
| Ruby631 2004-09-19 ch 1, | abusevery sweet and sightly erotic. I WANT MORE! |
| Dark Shedevil 2004-08-10 ch 1, | abuseThis story is getting intresting. And Paine and Rikku love scene was unique, couldn't quite find some Parikku lemon around here, but it's nice this has another meaning towards it. |
| hybridchick108 2004-07-19 ch 1, | abuseaahh! i love it hehe oh i hope you write more! |
| Ganondorfson 2004-06-03 ch 1, | abusei love this story ive added it to my favorite list. write more! |
| Stephen Hansen 2004-05-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseNO! WHY THE ** DID YOU STOP AT THE SEX? I WAS WAITING FOR THAT! As you can see I'm rather upset and was DYING to see Rikku eat **. I WRITE THE SEX SCENE FOR ALL OF MY STORIES!! My friend says that theyr'e good enough to jerk off to. I don't care if you didn't need to know that, I'm ** MAD. But oh well. -Steve |
| Princess of the Midnight Mo... 2004-04-29 ch 1, | abuseIt's really good...can't wait for you to update! |
| CrimsonWhisper 2004-04-26 ch 1, | abuseI loved this fic, loved the angstyness and the way ya just skipped the outright sex sceen, very hot, i Loved the two previous companion fics as well, great job, cant wait to read more. -jenn |
| Rain54 2004-04-08 ch 1, | abuseReally nice scene, but perhaps it was a bit too short hehe... Rikku/Paine definitely my fave couple now.Keep writing about them and update your other fic soon! =) |
| aliceautumn 2004-03-31 ch 1, | abuseOk, I have one word: "Wow.". I've been a fan of Paine/Rikku fanfics for a while (I'm working on mine... yeah... shameless self-publicity), and all the ones you've written so far have been great. I loved how you skipped the sex scene, because the story is a lot more romantic that way. If you ever do write Paine/Rikku smut though, that'll be great too, but I think you did a really good job with this one. |
| Mistress Lina 2004-03-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey, this was better than I thought it'd be. x3 I think I'm glad you skipped the sex scene. You didn't overkill it that way. Great job. =3 |
| xxFireDemon256xx 2004-03-13 ch 1, | abuse**!You write really good stories!Dude keep it up!I'm lookin forward to anew one soon! Luv all ya lezzy's out thurr! |
| Neko 2004-03-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice story! u just had 2 skip the sex scene eh? But none the less it was a great story n plz write the next chapter soon! i can't wait 2 see what happens! ^__^ |
| AshwolfX 2004-03-01 ch 1, | abuseWow... Love your little Paine & Rikku moments you have there. Looking forward to the next update. ^__^ |