that was funny

Why does this story is a cliffhanger?( I luv the story at the beginning! Can you please make some more episode? The end of this story is not quite understandable!))

For the first chapter, i quite don't mind, i luv long chapters , i even think of a(n) longer one, heheh. Sorry, but if Pikachu can't hit REBD, why can REBD hit pikachu? I'm confused!

My other reviews said that your writing style misses the drama category... Well, humor's definitely your thing. Try doing it more often, 'cause you're good at it.

The last four lines are the most funny, but I would really liked to have seen a longer 'duel', or maybe Ash trying to learn how to duel.

IT TOOK YOU 2 YEARS TO DO THAT!

oh, thats so... sweet. heh, nice story! you should write more like it, your good at this comedy thing.

lol that was funny! onto the last chapter

nice chapter... i dunno why im so tired... keep writing... wait, this is complete. well, great story...

ah i wish i knew yugiho... see, i dont even know how to spell it... great story... i was laughing... :)

i like it

I liked it. It was really funny, hope you make more chapters!

These chapters are a bit short. And what h appened to Ash and his friends. And I hope you continue it soon. Because you havent updated since 2004 and we are in 2006. Email me and tell me if you are going to continue it soon. my email is Bye

Serenity? Was it supposed to be Mysty. But either way you are doing an awsome job. Keep up the good work.

This is funny! How about a little romance in it too?

M...nice chapter. They're eating food. Well, I guess that's THAT. Umm, yeah. Well, I have a story with Pokemon and Yu-Gi-Oh in it together. You can check it out if you want on my profile page. Of course...it could get deleted any SECOND because of strict rules here... Oh well... Good story anyway!