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Rawr Its Maddy
2006-03-03 . chapter 2
LOVE THIS STORY UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!1
Divine-Feline
2005-08-19 . chapter 2
This is good...

Are you still alive?
Dishonorable
2005-08-14 . chapter 2
Update soon.
Raspberri13
2005-05-14 . chapter 2
oh! lovin the story so far! =)

emily..xx
katemary77
2005-04-22 . chapter 2
Hey, this is such an original idea and you've made such a great start, it seems like a shame to not update. Hope you can soon.
cluummmmsy
2005-01-30 . chapter 2
In the first chapter I was pleasantly surprised with your different take on Hermione going to the past. I love Maurader stories, and Hermione and Sirius stories as well. From what I've read so far are mostly time-turner related. I liked that you choosed another method to get Hermione to the past. I adore Hermione's interaction with Sirius at the pub and the lake. It's well written. I was a bit astonished that Dumbledore gave 'Jane' a slightly negative point of view of James, Remus, Sirius, and Peter. I would think that Dumbledore would have a certain fondness for them. But as I thought about it more, I realized that he was just worried about Jane's welfare. Jane's line at the end of the 2nd chapter, "I’m not stupid, she thought. “He just doesn’t want me around any boys...," confirmed it. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. Awesome work!

Jamie
A_lonely_traveler_on_an_empty_road
2005-01-20 . chapter 2
Hey, I love your story and all, and have been keeping tabs on it for a while now, since before it was being re-written and had more chapters then it has now. I'm wondering... when are you going to repost those chapters- which were decent writing and didn't need re-writing anyway- and when are you going to post up new chapters? I feel kind of sad, that a more original fic like this would be laying by the wayside.

If you're going to abandon this fic or whatever, could you just please come out and tell us that already? It seems to me that it's unfair to leave us- the devoted readers- hanging for such a long time when we'd love to read more of this intriguing story which has drawn us in from the start. I hope that's not too much to ask, that you could inform us what your take on the status of this fic is. Is it a priority? Are you leaving it alone? Are you braindead? Sad? Annoyed with it?

Please, please, please just do something with it! I really can't stand it anymore! I want to know

1. what's happening

OR

2. that I should stop looking hopefully at this fic every month or so, daring to wish for an update and having my hopes crash and burn everytime I do so.

Thank you for your time, and I hope you take my frustrated rant to heart.

If you do decide to continue with this fic, I wish you the best of luck, because I cannot wait to see what's next for our heroine! If you decide to abandon this poor fic, I cannot say that I am glad with your decision or anything, but I will respect it and go mope in a corner for a while before trying to find a fic that might possibly be up to bar with this one.

Here's my part where I try to convince you to update fast, furiously, and soon: Your story rocks. Really, really rocks. I think it's up to a very high caliber. I enjoyed reading it, and am sad that there have been no updates *even re-write updates* for so long. Do you want me to be sad? No...

Update, please and thank you, with a cherry on top. Maybe the sugar high you would get from an ice cream sundae would encourage you to write? *hopeful look*
angil10
2005-01-14 . chapter 2
Is it love at first sight? Update soon please.
vache
2004-12-31 . chapter 2
hmm this is interesting. its different how she doesnt even know who she really is. update soon
runaway mental patient
2004-11-11 . chapter 2
cool! but i want hermione to get some of her memories back
Expectance
2004-11-10 . chapter 2
aw I really like this story it's cute, Hermoine/Jane and Sirius have good chemistry, I can tell! Update soon!
Kidden
2004-11-10 . chapter 2
I really love your story, I've been waiting for you to update for a long time! Please continue!
The-Ever-Lazy-One
2004-11-10 . chapter 2
Yay! Glad to see another chapter re-up. Good luck on re-writing.
The-Ever-Lazy-One
2004-10-27 . chapter 1
Glad you're re-writing... it's always good to seek improvement... but please tell me that the plot will be furthered along soon... I'm sad from the wait... poor me... Okay, so write new chapters soon, good luck with revisions, and cheers to a great, great, great story!
Donroth
2004-10-21 . chapter 9
I hope you'll still continue writing this. I can't wait to read more! Maybe more writers should follow your example and devote more effort to their characterization. Fabulous chapter! ;)
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