That was great! Yes, "Mitothin" is spelled with a T...so what? Went a little overboard on frappuccinos, didn't you? Write more.

Very fun, I liked it alot! Reminded me of Traci and Alana's work. I also have to make an adjective that will go with it now just to convey the fact that I am a weird person.

It was shiny!

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OK, that was...strange...but...I LIKE it! It was great!

Keep up the good work!

Brit: *pours frappuchino on Mitohin* There!/ Will: You. Are. Nutz./ Bran: *nods*/ Brit: Review! Okay! Um.../ Will and Bran: *sweatdrop*/ Will: She liked it./ Bran: Yes. Laughed her pants off./ Will: ROFLHAO/ Brit: NEW FAVORITE!/ Bran: *groan* You have like 55 already!/ Will: *dully* What's one more, eh Brit?/ Brit: *grin and nod* Bye! BYE!

LOL! My favorite part was when that ex-Lord Darien guy left and was never heard from again, and the rumor was that he turned you-know-what. Anyway, it kind of confused me. I'm a The Dark is Rising fan (it's my favorite book), but I didn't understand some of it. Since... all the Light and Dark ever do is drive each other away. They are both immortal and cannot kill one another... I think. Two words to describe what I think of the story: frappuchino obsessed.

this one was pretty good-a lot of comedy

Hey MK, BRILLIANT STORY! I come from Wales so can tell you that you did a great job on the Geography and a not so bad job on the welsh. Beth bynnag...looking forward to more of the same. If you write one with welsh in it again you can mail me at and I'll be happy to help out!

Hwyl am nawr -DdC

Um...um...um... um...um...um...um...um...um...um...um...um... I like the Black Rider!

Loved it! That was really good! "Hey watch it kid, maybe you should crawl away somewhere and die." Ah, Blacky goes sarcastic... the horror of it all. And I was drinking a frappachino as a read this... that is ironic... don't you think? Also, thanks for mentioning us! And don't worry, we WILL mess up the holy grail plan. ::evil laughter abounds... Traci of the Wild Magic

Hallo! I really enjoyed your story. It really amused me! ::giggles and gryns:: Only one thing though, I think its Mitothin w/ a 't'. But I could be wrong. I'll consult Traci. Which brings me to something else. Traci wanted me to tell you (or rather she threatened me ::smirks::) that she won't beable to read your story until Tues (?) or b/c she's gone on a trip over the weekend. (The lucky weasel...) It's raining here and I'm quite giddy...anyways...I loved the story and keep writing! Now I must go send a ICQ message to Traci to annoy her when she gets back that I've already read your story! BWAHAHAHA! I'm such a good friend. ;) Blessed be the High (heh) and Wild Magick!