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Candyland 3/7/04 . chapter 1Stunning! |
butterflydreaming 3/4/04 . chapter 1 I'm starting to *like* Ruby Moon. You do such a great job with her in this. The dynamics with her and E and Spinel are just right. Nicely concise fic. that says a lot about relationships, characters, and motivations. |
Laurus Nobilis 2/20/04 . chapter 1Oh, grat job! It's nice to see this side of Eriol. Must be difficult for him to keep himself separated from Clow (especially in that house!), and I really liked your comment about the line blurring. I liked to see Kaho's nice side, too. That's something that doesn't happen very often... And the last dialogue between Nakuru and Suppi was great. :) My favourite part was the paragraph about rain and renewal, though. Loved it. |
justblue24 2/20/04 . chapter 1 Hmm..sweet. cute. nice. great. good. that's all i guess. |
peacewish 2/19/04 . chapter 1 Wai, so cute. I always like getting a glimpse behind Eriol-the-smooth-talking-plotter to Eriol-poor-kid-with-Clow's-memories. So many different ideas on what it means to be a reincarnation, and everybody's perspective is just a little different. Sakura may be the one enduring all the tests, but Eriol is the one who knows what has to happen and plan accordingly - such an unbelievable amount of pressure. And in a new country to boot. I really wouldn't mind seeing the entire third season from his perspective, which I don't think anyone's ever done before. The last bit of dialogue between Nakaru and Spinel was extremely cute. 'widdle Suppi want a widdle biscuit?' More corny than funny and yet I laughed anyway. That house would be so depressing without Nakaru to brighten things up. She's fun. Well done. |
Kodomo Hikari 2/19/04 . chapter 1Wow girl...I just love the way you characterize the CCS characters that I find myself comparing my own CCS characterizations to yours as a way to see if I hadn't accidentally turned them into OOC. This is a heartfelt compliment. You really understand them. |
WoLfePaWs 2/19/04 . chapter 1That was an incredible one-shot[is it?] you have there...eh, sorry I couldn't find any words to put into this review right now[since it's night and my brain would just stop functioning and fuzz up right there if I were to use it]...strange, isn't it that I'm still able to read even though my brain's stop..._...oh well, that's one of my strange weird traits... |
Rinoa Kitty 2/19/04 . chapter 1 Absolutely beautiful. I understand the sentiment behind the "servants" bit about Nakuru and Suppi-chan, but I sort of felt as though that made Eriol a little bit too cold. I'll have to sulk about how nice Kaho sounds in this story, even though its 100% right on. Fabulous though, I love it! Nakuru and Spinel are perfect at the end, as is Eriol. thank you so much, you've made my day! |
TamChronin 2/19/04 . chapter 1OOh! I like! This is very well done. A nice contemplation and even has some sweet EK moments that remind me of the better parts of MD&S...or how that one *should* have been. I'm so glad you came up with the idea for challenges. This has really brought some quality back to the CCS fandom. applauds Heck, I'm *all* for something that gets *you* to write more often. grins |