I'm just letting you know you've mislabled your fic. It's obviously a Jack/Sam piece, but it's under Jonas&Sam. You should probably fix that.

But the fic itself is quite good, but very angsty. You added a harshness to Jack and was a tad harder to swallow, but it worked. Nice work.

you should continue this fic

Please May I have some more?

This is interesting. I don't think Sam was entirely in character, but I love the idea. I'm glad someone wrote a post-grace fic, that episode definitely needed a talented writer such as yourself to finish it. :) It would be really nice if you would add another chapter to this. PPLLEEAASSE?

that was great

Yay! (claps) So sweet... You had me worried for a split second there in the middle, but it turned out ok in the end... Loved the songs you used too! Bravo!

wow.
just...wow.
this was beautiful...
i loved it!
can't wait to see your next work of art!
much love to ya!