 red 2009-11-20 . chapter 1 love the story |
 Shannon Dee 2009-11-11 . chapter 4You have remarkable vision, that shows in your stories, including this one. Thank You |
 KitsuneOverlord 2009-10-29 . chapter 1Very good work, a gem amongst Ranma x SailorMoon crossovers. |
 Ceridwen Kalamack 2009-06-30 . chapter 4It's been two years and this is still one of my favorite stories. |
 deathgeonous 2009-05-25 . chapter 1Reread this again, and I was wondering if you'll ever continue it. Well, thanks for writing what you have of it, bye for now. |
 The Wandering Soul of 1014 2009-01-15 . chapter 4-O, I really like where this is going, but that short summery isn't going to cut it for me. I hope your still OK in all, but I hope it doesn't bother you too much if I push for an update in the near future.
Happy writing, and update soon! |
 moritynz 2008-12-03 . chapter 4I really like it |
 Megatyrant 2008-10-03 . chapter 4A great story so far. I would love to see this completed, as well as some of your other works, but seeing as that may take a while, I'll just have to wait for it. :) |
 GeorgeTobor 2008-09-26 . chapter 4Thank you very much for the outline! I wish more authors did that. A full, completed story is the best but I know sometimes its not possible. I never flame or blame a writer for small stuff like typos or anything, and I am thankful for any update to a good story. This is one of the best stories and you are one of the best writers. But I understand old age, I'm getting there myself, although you are my senior still. While finished stories are great, I have to add that it is also fun to dream up ending to unfinished stories in my head. So I'm thanking you for giving me hours of entertainment that brings me a smile. That is so needed in this disturbed world we live in, thanks again, and best of luck in life! |
 masaki yang yi1 2008-09-25 . chapter 4I am well pleased with your story,well done,my only question is would you be willing to flesh out the last part of chapter four? |
 Blackdex 2008-09-08 . chapter 4Love the update, sorry it took so long to get to, i have a LONG list. please continue, but dont rush yourself. ciao |
 mikebreslau 2008-07-02 . chapter 3Classic mistake (theirs, not yours): The idiot fathers discover that the curses mix, not cure, so what do they do? They obtain four casks of 'cure' water for their cursed friends and selves. Bright!
Anyway, enjoying this story. I like feel-good tales with a hint of humor, and this is one such...
Mike |
 paulatobor 2007-12-15 . chapter 4 You updated one of my favorite stories! And then gave a synopsis of what may come! Thanks! |
 2007-12-08 . chapter 4 I have always liked this story, and I was happy to see the update.
From what you've said on your website, some commenters are less than happy at your fondness for Ranma-chan stories. That isn't a problem I've had; Kenko's "Girl Days" and Fred Herriot's "Lonely Souls" are two of my favorite stories.
I'm willing to tolerate less-than-literate writing if the story appeals to me. This isn't a problem that you have; your writing is professional-grade.
Reading your work is a joy, and I'd love to see more of it. |
 Asgeras 2007-12-08 . chapter 4Great update. Your fics tend to hold a touch of maturity to them, lending an overall feeling of well roundedness. Thanks for that. ^^
Also, your prophecy seemed to be done fairly well, in my opinion. It touched both on past and future events, was cryptic in places while remaining fairly clear in others, and was set in language and verse of olde. A good combination for prophecy. :P
Not a whole lot more to say. Usually, if I find a bit more room for improvement, I'll end up writing a longer review. As things currently stand, thanks for the fic. I hope to see more (relatively) soon, but wanted to express my appreciation for releasing what you've written to date. So...thanks! |