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| Unsigned 2004-08-22 ch 1, | abuse:) Very good! I love it. |
| alllieee 2004-08-21 ch 20, | abuseI love how you write! The characters are so great and so right on. I loved it when Weiss said "It wasn't so much that you were obvious as it was you were completely lacking in subtlety" - it's so typical Weiss. And the magic eightball thing? Priceless. Another great line was when Dixon said, "Apparently the Covenant has no regard for holiday weekends. As far as I'm concerned that gives us one more reason to stop them." HA! You're awesome. Can't wait to read more. |
| Apolla-J 2004-05-16 ch 20, | abuseAw, how sweet! The ending, I mean. And the pain Vaughn felt when Sydney was in the coma was all too real...heartbreaking. But Weiss...hilarious! I love how you write him, it just cracks me up. It's nice to see a nicer side of Jack, too. A more human side. |
| Fair Cate 2004-02-21 ch 20, | abuseWow you achieved something which I have never brought myself to do - read a twenty chapter story, from start to finish, in one sitting! Not bad!! While your style is not what I am used to, your storyline really captured my attention and kept me reading til the end. Congrats on an excellent story and I hope to read more in the future!! Cate |