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| petersadouchebag14 2006-09-30 ch 1,  | abuseaw |
| crzygrl 2006-07-01 ch 1, | abusehey that was good..are u gonna keep adding more?? jw...ne way i thought it was good... |
| sweetgirl769 2006-04-19 ch 1, | abuseIt was a great story. The ending is so sweet! |
| Juanita 2005-06-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was a beautiful story. I really enjoyed it. Would you consider adding maybe one or two more chapters about what happened to her and her new life with Grissom and their son ? |
| EbonyFox 2004-06-21 ch 1, | abuseThat was achingly poignant. I guess I'm just a sucker for these things. |
| Kathleen 2004-05-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, that was awesome! |
| Quill-32 2004-05-11 ch 1, | abuseUnusual and well-done! I like the fact that the kid is fascinated by bugs too. |
| Grissom 2004-04-26 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was a really great story! ~Gris |
| niff74 2004-03-11 ch 1, | abuseDamn, woman, you're *good*... this made me reach for the kleenex box quite a few times. You've always been the master of writing emotions, and as always, managed to paint perfect visual images, this time a lot different from your usual creations, but just as perfect, and even more touching, if that's even possible. It read *real*, and little Gil was just too charming for words, as was John. It's so good to have you back writing... don't ever leave us again, you hear? ;) |
| luxor 2004-02-24 ch 1, | abuseGoodness, that was quite a few challenge details to fit in there ... but of course you did it and made it look effortless. Firstly, thanks for the truly happy ending, really, as I am sucker for those! :-) And this one was particularly touching, not to mention tearjerking! Again I am floored by the emotion you create with your words--Grissom's pain and despair, Sara's pain and frustration, and yes, you even make me feel sorry for John and Jojo! And how much do I just LOVE little Gil! Beautifully done, as always. |
| ShortieGirl06 2004-02-23 ch 1, | abuseThere's no words to explain this story! It was very well-written! I loved it! :) |
| And Also With You 2004-02-22 ch 1, | abuseThis was great stuff. Different from your usual stuff, but definitely just as great! I really liked your OC John--he was necessary to the plot, but didn't interfere enough to wreck the story--perfect! Great job! |
| Laredo Grissom 2004-02-22 ch 1, | abuseWhat a terrific story! I just love these types. The only criticism is that I wish you had made it longer, giving us more to read. Truly a great read though! |
| leddy 2004-02-22 ch 1, | abuseEven though this had a happy ending it still brought tears to my eyes. Great job tying everything together. Loved the fact that Sara still named her baby, Gil, even though she had amnesia. |
| luminol_leese 2004-02-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh anansay this was EXCELLENT! i love all your stuff but *still* i really enjoyed this one :) it was a great challenge, almost got *me* writing! hehehehe keep up the great work! Lisa :) |