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Dreamingdreams 2006-12-11 ch 9,	abuseWow that is one major cliff hanger. I just read all of this in one day. I love it, I hope that you will post your final chapter soon on here or at the Blissful Ignorance site. I will be looking forward to reading it.
Litanya 2006-06-28 ch 7,	abuseG'day mate! Lol, I know that you wrote this a long time ago, and so you probably won't get this review, but you asked if Australians even read this. Well... I am an Australian and I loved the fact that you mentioned my country. The only thing is... I think that you got the words to 'Waltzing Matilda' at the end of the chapter wrong. It's "who'll come a Waltzing Matilda with me" I think. Well, that's how we always sung it anyway. I really love this fic by the way.
animearlinefreak 2005-12-20 ch 9,	abuseThis is good and I really want you to update this soon!
nissepisse 2005-12-06 ch 9,	abuseI just read both the sinister game and para bellum during a 3 hour reading marathon. my eyes are bloodshot, i have had a brutal craving for food since the beginning of para bellum, nevre stopping to read since i just had to know how it ends...and now i realise that this story isnt done...damnit you have to finish this story off. Especially after saying that kaname is pregnant you just cant leave it unfinished...curse you...
Kim 2005-10-29 ch 9, anon.	abuseOMG! I guess you're probably not gonna update, but I'd like to tell you how much I love your story, in the hopes that you'll finish it...It'll be on my favorite list! Please update someday, I have to know what happens! (BTW: Your Sousuke is SO much more in character than any other i've seen...kudos! Also, you make Gauron sexy and creepy at the same time...weird, but I like it!)
fan 2005-07-21 ch 1, anon.	abusethis series is really interesting...but where is the 10th and final chapter? i'm dying to find out what happens in the end!
Fadingstar 2005-04-19 ch 9, anon.	abuseThis is an amazing story. I am so glad that I stumbled across it. Please finish!
darkrose2006 2005-01-20 ch 9,	abuseThis is one of the best fanfics I swear I've read. So much drama, it's so completely great. This is why I am begging you to finish this. You say you have one more chapter to go so please finish it. I'm dieing to know what the end result is. Also I like the extensive use of profanity this is about battles, war, and sorrow, the extensive use of profanity just makes it so real. So if you can finish this fanfic it would be greatly appreciated. Thank you Ja ne!
kalisita 2004-10-06 ch 9, anon.	abuseok, it's been 3 months! for the love of god, update already!! the suspense is killing me!
MJP 2004-07-14 ch 9,	abuseAwesome... I was glued to my monitor for the entire chapter, and I'm glad nobody called. I was really drawn in... the dialogue, the sequences... this chapter was a good break from the high-drama action and politics; I feel like it gave me more of a chance to see something new in your vision of Sousuke. Very cool. ^_^
MJP 2004-07-14 ch 8, anon.	abuseMad props for the Strangelove refs. I would pay good money for Mardukas to use the line "Mein fuhrer! I can walk!" or for Gauron to spout the whole dialogue of human adaptability. ^_^
MJP 2004-07-09 ch 3, anon.	abuse'"What’s he talking about? I didn’t understand half of what he said… Is he one of them… Whaddya’ call ‘em… Metrosexuals? No…" Gauron laughed. "Of course, that’s just Jewish lore."' Very awesome. I would have commented on chapter 2, but I blazed right on in. I had to sorta peel myself back. What is this 4chan everyone speaks about... o_O This is still awesome; I think, however, it's a little bit on the obvious side who the kendo instructor really is... I'd put in something like a quirk (Some sort of scar, a vocal cue, etc.) that clues us in a little better. Still great, though. ^^
MJP 2004-07-09 ch 1, anon.	abuse"Meanwhile, Tom Clancy had a heart attack as a result of glee, knowing he would have material until the day he died and then some." Best. Line. EVER. This has a very good grasp of politics, I think, and you seem to have a well-informed and savvy grasp of politics. If you haven't consider it, I think you oughta take some classes in international politics and/or political economy. And if you're not in college, you sure fooled this poli-sci grad. ^_^
cultnirvana 2004-06-24 ch 9,	abuseA great story, just as the prequel was. Loved the way you have Sousuke confiding with Sakura without being to outwardly emotional. Just his style :) Can't wait to get back to Kaname now. Keep up the great work, cultnirvana
Sabersonic 2004-06-21 ch 9,	abuseThis seems like an interesting development to the story, wonder what'll happen next. But I have just one question: The US carriers are named Providence, Justice, and Freedom right? Tell me that you didn't get those names from SEED.

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