A great story. I liked the part where the team was sitting with Catherine when she came to.

I love this story. I've been reading a lot of your fics recently, and this is definately one of my favourites.

it's a cool fanfic... maybe you should think about writing a sequel... i would like to know what happens next.

does this story have an aftermath? i love it!

Your stories are so great and nice and long as well. Keep up the good work

Wow - seriously wow. I mean, i've never been a great fan of GSR stories but this is...excellent. What can I say? Your stories have made me a convert!! Good plot, excellent characterisation - every character is perfect down to the very last detail. Keep it up!!

As always, you got me hooked with your story, GREAT JOB! I LOVE IT!

It must be said. Burked, you are a genius. Another wonderful, addicting story. The casefile is fascinating, a brilliant use of backstory, friendships and relationships, and of course the excellent resolution to the GSR. Every character from Grissom down to Sam Braun is perfectly drawn and exactly they should be ... you have the amazing talent that truly brings them to life in our imagination. You're too good to stay in this little corner of the world but I keep thanking my lucky stars that you continue to write and delight us with stories like this!

Burke your writing is an addiction like few others. Everything you write is so well done and so powerful that I feel I should be paying you to read these stories. You and Mossley need to be writing for CSI. Sure it would be G/S heavy but hey...there would be no complaints from me. :) I can't say enough how good this story is...keep them coming. And thank you...I think I would rather read your fic's than any novel I own in my house.

wow. I mean, wow. This is one of the best fics I've read recently. Your dialogue and characterisation was flawless; the pacing was spot on. Though was it wrong that I loved Sam? I never liked him on the show, but the way you write him, he's a fantastic character. Maybe I just have a thing for guys who'll do anything for their daughters. Congrats, you made a cold blooded murderer a sympathetic and understandable character. That's a mark of a great writer.
Usually I like to include some constructive criticism in a review, but it isn't easy with this piece. Although in the final Catherine/Braun scene, Cath refers to Paonessa as 'dude' which doesn't seem like a word she would use, especially about a hired killer. Yes, I'm being picky. By writing such a fantastic fic, you leave me no choice. Great work and I hope you're gonna be writing more soon.

I really love your stories. Everytime I see your name as the author I know I'm in for a treat. Maybe because you write about my favorite couple--Griss and Sara. Keep up the good work.

“You writing my life story?

Wow...yet another great story from one of the masters. Loved it. Filled with angst, humor, and good ol' G/S!
I did like the part about Gris being the crazy uncle...cracked me up! Very sweet ending too!
Keep it up (of course you will, right?)
~Gris

i really enjoy your stories. hope to see more soon!

Absolutly wonderful. Well written. Believable dialogue, good structure.