Perfect. I could feel the tears coming when she introduced him to Bliss. Good tears.

This would be a wonderful place to end the story, but if there is more to tell, I want to read it.

Thank you so much for all of the stories.

A great big hug for a great story!

I feel so contented now. Thank you for finishing the story. And I have to say it was brilliant... all 8 chapters. Such a beautiful story.

I loved how you kept it kinda ambiguous whether he really is Cupid or not. That only he saw the snow capped mountains and gleaming temples. And he could have fallen into the water and fled the country. Only Trevor and the gods know and the rest of us just have to believe.

I was rewatching those 15 episodes of Cupid that aired and realised how grateful I am that you continued their story. Though I wonder what your thoughts are on what would have been in Cupid's file by that linguistics professor with the Red Riding Hood story(Ep2) and also that other episode(Ep11) with the 'if you were a car' gameshow and he could have been this patient named Preston Milke at some institute where they asked that question.

Regarding writing more, i'd love to read more of course, but I like how you've 'ended' it in this chapter. They're together again and have baby Bliss.

Anyway, keep writing and i'll keep reading. Cheers.

Gumtuu, this is another wonderful chapter. I do hope you have the next one ready to go, because you seem to have taken the term cliffhanger almost literally.
Again I have to say I love the way you present the overlapping scenes. You fill my mind with gorgeous images.

YAY! an update. I love this chapter. Thanks for continuing!

I cannot believe that it has been more than a year since the last update. What a doll you are to keep going. It has to be so tempting to just set it aside and walk away, but this is such a wonderful story and you are telling it so well. Anyway, please don't stop.

As usual, I am stunned by the way you write this, the imagery is amazing. My favorite scene was Trevor in the glider. Of course he was a natural. It was a perfect gift for her to give him.

And they are married. Happiness.

Thank you, JoAnn

Hi.

Know it's been awhile since I updated. The story's been finished in my head for so long I sometimes forget it isn't finished here. :) I will finish eventually, but until then a little music spoiler for the rest of the story. There are 3 more songs to go over the next final pages. Lullabye by B.Joel, True by R.Caberra, and Dante's Prayer by l. mckinnet.

Hope that doesn't give too much away. :)

steve

Thank You for another chapter, even if only a partial.
Frechette being "haunted" by Faith is so perfect.

I also loved the image of Claire sitting in the swing nest to Trevor and leaning her head on his shoulder. Her explanation of the reason Faith did what she did was reasonable and I'm glad she shared it with Trevor. I hope he will find it healing for him as he has time to think about it.

And finally, Michael and Angela dancing with the motes swirling around them is a lovely affirmation of what he has accomplished.

THANK YOU STEVE! It was a great chapter. And the final scene?! Faith?! What's going on? Oh nooes..

Pls continue soon!

Thank you for another chapter. I imagine it must be hard to come back to something after so long and I really do appreciate you doing this.

You lay out your scenes so well it is like watching the show. Wait, there was no music in this episode. OK, it is almost like watching the show.

Good to see Trevor has friends down here among the mere mortals, too. Hope this leads to Jaclyn and Champ getting back together. The flashlight idea was so funny and so Jaclyn.

And the final scene, well, let's just say I am holding you to the To Be Continued.

page 4 up soon...

steve

Again, let me say that your wife is right.

Good to see the old Trevor peek out, even if it was only for a moment.

This is so good. Please finish.

First, your wife is right.

Second, interesting last line. I wonder who said it.

Third, this chapter. He really didn't have any other choice. Had to be done. Liked the line about him being a marksman.

Hey thanks for the reviews everyone!

As for Falling Home, it's been finished in my head since 20. :) Been busy lately, not as much time to write. The story hasn't changed much since then however, except for some of the music I want to use for the end. (decided on an artist with initials l.m.) Not trying to tease, just trying to show it really has been in there for 5 years. Whoah... that seems long even to me. :)

I'll try to work on it more, maybe get it out of my head soon! My wife tells me all the time that I should. But for now, I can even give you the last line. Hope it's not too much of a spoiler. So maybe ignore this if you don't want to know...

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"I have friends in high places"

I have tried to resist reading this last story, because it is the last and because it isn't finished, but I have to know at least as much as there is to know.

I know it must be hard to come back to something after you have been away from it for a while, but I see you have gotten several reviews for your most recent update of this so it isn't just me waiting for the ending of this story (why does it have to end!?!).

Anyway, I was sure I knew where you were going as I was reading this chapter, but I had to keep changing my mind as I went.

My favorite image was the sunlight between them in the conference room. Lovely. As always.