Aw.. of course, the summary is nice. Naturally, I would have prefrerred to read an additional 30 chapters of beauty, but at least I'm not left wondering what might have been. I hope that in the future, you'll find the part of yourself you lost, and will finish this.
-Nocterayne
Sarpedon 12/8/05 . chapter 9
Wow.. I just found this. Excellent more then excellent brilliant really. You have a great style this had me hooked.
If you ever did want to finish this I am certian you could score a huge fan base back no problem
intrasonic 1/25/04 . chapter 9
Sort of finished? You little sod. WHERE'S THE REST OF THE STORY?
Ah, I suppose I'll refrain from being a hypocrite.
The story was going good, man. Kick-ass fight scenes, and fantastic character portrayals in the new universe. Even the summary was sounding pretty tight, especially the angle with Cyan, Shadow and Relm.
As crazy as it sounds, I'm honestly wondering why the idea of Celes hitting the sauce hasn't been tried more often.
I love this story, and hope to see more of it relatively soon. (And as we all know, relative is relatively relative term, especially when used relatively. Wow. That was pointless.) In any case, I love how you presented Terra as the villain, and how well thought out that presentation WAS. I also like how you seem to keep the game's scenes in mind: South Figaro under seige (is this the proper term? I am uncertain) and the attack on Doma, and what looks to be Celes' escape. It flows nicely with a game-fanatic's perceptions, and yet is altered enough to be quite original. The detailing is amazing, and I particularly enjoy your presentation of the "Dragon Statue" as I have dubbed it. Some introduced artifacts are rather awkward, but I feel that this is not.
In my opinion, this is one of the best stories I have ever read on FF.net.
Oh my GOD. This chapter BLEW ME AWAY! Terra is just so EVIL! I MUST write certain WORDS in all CAPS because this is so GOOD! _ My favorite sentence was "The nose dipped, and the bulky aircraft turned belly-up almost lazily as the right engine, too, vomited sparks and then died." Man, this whole story is full of great imagery, but that one was just... WOW. Here I GO with the random CAPS again. So, yeah, I LOVE this story! Terra's going to give me nightmares, I just know it... _
Radia 7/18/01 . chapter 7
Yay! I'm glad you didn't quit on this. Can't wait for the next part.
Just finished reading it. Masterpiece of fanfiction. Only someone with a great deal of talent could pull off an alternate storyline to FF6's, that was as good as, if not better, than the original. Kudos and cheese to you, pal. I look forward to reading the next chapter! Peace -Sonic
I haven't read any of your fanfiction before but now it's safe to say I'll start reading some. Love the idea, the characters were well written, the style was good, and it's action-packed. Only annoying thing was *One hour later*, then you skip back and forth a lot. Congrats on a good FF6 fic. Peace -Sonic
Death Knight's Crowbar 5/2/01 . chapter 6
Your name shall be...angstLORD! Man, every person in this story is like an introverted freak! Sometimes people aren't that self-aware, ya know?
Good characterization, though. I'm just nitpicking.
This is very, very well written my friend. The battle scenes are excellent, and your description of what's going on is so clear that I can almost picture it perfectly! And I love the way that Terra has seemed to turned into Kefka! Lets hope she lays off the bizarre waredrobe though eh? LoL! (Hmm... Terra dressed as Kefka, complete with the laugh...!)
All in all, I just can't wait for the next chapter - no matter how long it takes. You have my deepest sympathies - I know only too well how irritating it is to face exams, papers and required reading just when you want to be writing!