cool story

OH poor Tara. That was very good

did reveiw this chapter already? Guess not.
O... implied nastiness... not what I had in mind, but why not!
I nevr noticed Eric botherig Tara, shows how much I pay attention huh?
hm, I didn't know that was how you spelled whore, thanks for the tip!
hey wow, short review, but I'm still trying to get use to y new keyboard, its not vry sensitive, so I have to push extra hard. Gag me. I should spell check this revew, 'cause I'm mssing these bloody un-senitive keys left and right!

That was very nice. You know how to write a nice romanic story. Keep it up.

well... of COURSE the last chapter is going to be important!
*goes cross-eyed in frustration with self*
oh... yes... I just HAD to read it! I couldn't skip a chapter and miss info, come on, it couldn't have been that mushy! HA! Maybe I should listen to you once in a while...
there is no way I can skip a chapter and live happily ever after. *sigh* BTW, it seems you play a key role in the fourth chapter of my fic if you're interested.

That was so romatnic keep it up it's starting to get really good.

*is currently on floor, gagiing and choking away her sugar-high self*
True: *gasp* *gag* WFR, how could you- *gag* do this to me! and I added you in chapter 3 of my fic! *gag* but- *choke* you-*gag* you're a-*gag* you're a-*gasp* ROMANCE AUTHOR NOW! AH! *holds head in pain* *cries out pleadingly* just- please- make it stop! *screams in agony*
Ryan: *snort* you're so immature.
True: *sits up* I am not!
Ryan: yes.
True: no!
Ryan: yes!
True: *hits Ryan with Power Skillet* I am NOT!

Two characters that you created in a love story, huh. That's very sweet, but are you tring to kill me with Cole/Alyssa. I know you said I have to wait, but I really want them to get together and soon. If they don't in this story I'm still reading anyway since I love your work.
Dominic

GAH! A romance fic! BETWEEN TWO AU CHARACTERS! I'll read it anyways. Due to my... *ahem* loyalty.
oh... *smiles coyly* I don't know, if I lay off the sugar you might not make it into chapter three of my latest insanity fic.
(even though I had already written you in before you asked, I know how you are about getting into people's fics! Why don't you write an insanity story? I think you'd be good at it!)

I like how your getting into Tara's past. I can't wait to read more.
P.S. Thanks for reviewing my poenm by the way. I thought that was cool.

*jumps out from rock she's been hiding under* Hey! Hi! I'm still here! I'm reading! Yes! You see me? *waves arms* yes! It's me! You can't get rid of me that easily! Hello! Hi!... Geez, I'm such a dork. Oh well! *continues waving arms and runs around in circles* sorry! I'm listening to P.O.D. right now! And I get to go on a road trip tommarrow! Yay! Woo hoo! Hi! Look at me! I'm still here! Hi! Hello!

Sorry for the late review, but school work has been crazy. You know that I won't let you down. Oh and of coyrse I enjoyed the story so far too. -Dominic