Hi! I love your story so far. The only advice I would give is a little work on the run on sentences. Not meaning to be insulting!

Very interesting story. I like your explanation for the villians' changes. Keep writing!

Of all the stories of yours that I have read, this one is by far my favorite. Besides working in the changes of appearance
in the characters, "Project--Arkham" presents an intriguing story with several characters portrayed in interesting ways,
particularly the Joker, who is the eternal wildcard, and Scarecrow, whose eery pleasure over his new appearance is simply
chilling. The only criticism I have is that I would liked to have seen more from your origonal character, Fredericks,
who came across as somewhat generic. I was also found that the Riddler was not portrayed as being particularly clever,
even with his enhanced intellect, making it something of an informed attribute, though that can largely be attributed to the story being told from his perspective,
so I cannot fault you for it. All in all, an engrossing and intriguing tale.

Many of Batman's rouges are exrtemely smart Bane is almost if not just as smart as Batman, the General though a child is a military genius and Anarky well jsut look the boy up Hush is a brilliant surgeon and crime boss (strategist and manipulator) so is Black Mask, the Mad Hatter is a genius neureltechnition Zsasz is very cunning and made a fortune in his international business company before he went serial killer, the Penguin is great criminal stategist, like a mob boss, Poison Ivy without her powers is an expert botanist and knows about poisons, the Riddler is an engineering and technology expert and aside from the OCD leaving clues behind thing he'd probably get away with just about any crime, Hugo strange and the scarecrow are expert pychologists and so is Harley Quinn the Joker is often reageded as very cunning and knowledgable in engineering and even philosophy as well, Two-face is lawyer, the Calculator is billiant, of course there is Ra's al Ghul and his League of Assassins, Catman does have high ilntelligence just rarely seems to use it, Catwoman is an expert thief from high to low tech burgleries, Man-Bat is a scientist and there are others like Prometheus and The Wrath who much like Batman himself

I never thought I would say this but the Joker is my hero!:)So's Eddie,of course.The Simpson's reference is when Homer thought he encountered an alien and it was actually Mr.Burns.It also had Mulder and Scully.All's well that Ends well.I guess.I wish that Jonathan looked normal..the way he is now is worse than when he was Scarebeast..eech.:(

Oh no!Not Batman!What's the Joker up to? :o

"I'm too smart to die." I guess that's better than,"I'm too pretty to go to jail." :)

Trust the Joker that Fredericks experiment wouldn't affect him at all.lol.As for Jonathan..he may be pleased at his new appearance but I'm not.Doesn't he realize that less is more?If he looks innocuous when he does something criminal it would be unexpected and so more frightening.Think how many serial killers look like the guy next door.

That Dr.Fredericks must have used Jervis's control chips so the guards wouldn't tell how drastically the Rogues are changing.If they look like they've been through chemo...:(

Even before I had read the entire chapter I knew which names would be on that list..Eddie,Jervis and Jonathan were the most obvious choices as was Ivy.But for the fifth one I was thinking either Harley,Twoface or poor Arnold.What is that guy doing to them?! :(

Awesome story hun! Really enjoyed your plots twists and turns, and of course being the huge Riddler fan that I am, I loved that you had his POV telling the tale ;)

"It's been done."
LOL

did not spot the simpson's ref, but your fanfic is good.

Very amusing, and full of interesting ideas. It could use a bit of a polish, but overall I enjoyed the story. Good job!

Yay a completed story!! And a good one at that! very impressive.

And I got the Simpsons reference! "Till I jam this down your throat!"

"Hey Everybody!"
"Hey Dr. Joker"!

Great work!