I love the ending here of Heero's pov. But it feels like there should be more to this. O.o

ok so what if he is getting some help from his buds that means they care for him man screw it that is just ass fuckin worng not letting your friends help you and he is NOT the prefect solider he is a human being

no...What's wrong with him? It's not right! Heero?

well thats interesting! A iron bar through his sholder! That hadto hurt!

Hm .. interesting stuff ...
This is good ... I'm wondering where you're headed with it ...
Come back quick with more! :)
Nat.

WOW... this is good... if there is more...please continue it soon

Wow, deep, nice work!

Well, Heero definately doesn't think very highly of himself, does he? Such a sad sack. Great use of emotive language here.
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DreamWeaver

This was good, im wondering what wufei tried saying before passing out, and hor Heero is handling alone .

Oh no! They'd blow up part of a residential area! That'll lay the guilt on, won't it? They're so unlucky, the five of them! I enjoyed reading it. It was very nicely done.
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DreamWeaver

I liked it very much.I thought it was very good. Keep up the good you read mine.
-Nikki