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The13thdoctor 2008-01-06 . chapter 1
Some further thoughts. I really do not beleive that Harry could have lasted 10 years on his own without going completely and utterly insane. Indeed i am in one half of a long distance relationship and at one point last year we were on holiday apart for most of august and didnt talk. By the time she got home after 3 weeks without talking I had almost gone catonic. And I really dont think Harry would need any effort to summon up the feeling of Ginny's arm on his shoulder. During the time apart last summer I regularly hallucinated her kisses on my lips. It still doesn't detract from the brilliance of the story though.
The13thDoctor 2008-01-01 . chapter 1
Wow. That was the scariest thing I have ever considered. The sense of dread I feel for poor harry.

would it hurt you to write a single story that was a little more upbeat, however?
SanityEscapesMe 2006-12-04 . chapter 1
WOW...that was great...
Quillian 2006-01-31 . chapter 1
Wow... O_O Truly chilling and guaranteed to make you think. Powerful work, in its own kind of way... (BTW, a story similar to this with the whole immortality/eternal-youth thing going on which you might be interested in is "Second Star to the Right" by Tiamath.)
Freakstar 2006-01-09 . chapter 1
wow. i never thought of that... you know, you are just amazing with plotbunnies. i would absolutely never have thought of anything like that! my gosh... and the style! i loved the style you used! you're an amazing author. this is my favorite story by you yet! i'm not sure if anything will be able to top it, but i guess i should go find out huh?
excessivelyperky 2005-10-25 . chapter 1
Wow. This is so very intense. I enjoyed it immensely. The ending feels like the ending of H.G. Wells' _The Time Machine_, when the inventor goes so far forward he comes to the end of the world.

Again. Wow.
Rocky235 2004-05-17 . chapter 1
I can't believe your first review said "update soon." They should have signed it from Idiot.
Well written with a nice style.
Celestial Being 2004-03-03 . chapter 1
*is in shock* That was so beautiful. Indescribably so...I loved how you incorporated the Mirror of Erised into it...ah...truly wonderful!
PhoenixPadfoot89 2004-02-26 . chapter 1
Wow...that was amazing! I love it, and it's soo deep! I didn't really think that the prophey meant Harry could live forever though. I don't see how it could say that, but obviously you do, and I think that's a wonderful way to interpret it. Your fic is wonderful. I would add it to my favorites list if it wasn't already full! I'm suprised you've only got 3 reviews. Really, that was excellent! I hope you continue to write, because you are great at it!
Jeebus dirtface 2004-02-26 . chapter 1
Incredible
chelime 2004-02-22 . chapter 1
that has to be one of the saddest things i ever read. i almost cried during that story. you portrayed Harry's feelings very well-his grief and his need for something, even if that something was insanity. and i liked your depiction of the prophecy. great story-i hope to read more like it.
charlie26 2004-02-21 . chapter 1
wow that was like wow it was confuzzing but at the sametime a totally understood its weird u said i would think that was almost a understament. but thank you that was totally good yea totally.later dayzs charlie
babyjayy 2004-02-21 . chapter 1
good story! update soon!
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