aw, cute story so far. I've enjoyed it thorouthly.
on to the next chapter...

you CANNOT stop this story! i just discovered this and it is AMANZING! please please please update!

xx

HELLO!
I LOVE YOUR STORIES!esp. the OC pairing with Will.it was homgz, sizzling.i daresay it's way better than the movie itself too.hope you'll update it soon.
CANT WAIT!

with love,

Hi! I loved this chapter and I have just founf this story and alreafy love it. Keep up the very good work. I'm hooked/addicted to this story.

great story!!

ShopGirl1

This is a very good story. You have developed the characters so that each character can be related to in some way, such a Patience's worry for her family or Will's inner battle on which women he loves more. (Elizebeth or Patience.) The

Please update this story

HEY YOU! Why in the bloody hell haven't you updated in OVER A FREAKING YEAR?! Are you dead? Are you suffering from amnesia? If not then UPDATE! Right now...

..I mean it..now.

Anyways, this is an amazing WillOC. It took me a little over 2 hours to read and I was very ill when I discovered where you left off. Your OC is very very well written and isn't horribly out of place like many characters that are written into PotC fanfics. You seem to have done plenty of research and background work on the story and it is very refreshing to find a work such as this within the not so great ones that frequent this site. PLEASE CONTINUE!!

I really like this story, and I hope that you update soon. It's good so please continue with it.

OK I love this story! I just read the entire thing over a period of two days and I absolutely need more! There are not many WillOC stories out there, especially ones as good as yours! I really want to see the controntion between Ortiz and Patience, if there will be one! I love it, please update, I know you have not in a while, but think of your readers who are dying to figure out more! Absolutely fabulous story! UPDATE!

Wonderful! This is such a great story and I would love to see the end of it! I love Patience's character and lil Benjy. lol You also got Jack and the others characters down to the T. Great job!

Hello..i was wondering if you are going to finish your story called "test of fate" ? because i really love that story..

if you want to get in touch with me(which i hope you do so i can talk to you about this) my email is akina61386@

Finally an update! I've been waiting for so long! Hope you update soon:)

I thought you had forgotten about this story! You have no idea how unbelievably happy it makes me that you updated! Do it again soon!

yay! tehy finally said it!

WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN? lol wow cool chapter, loved it