Wow... this story was so good, I absolutely loved it. Every sentence was deep, and it felt like I actually was the character. If this website would let you rate stories, I would have given it a six out of five. Bravo!

Well, I finally got around to reading this, and I'm holding back on the threats, considering I'm getting a considerable amount from my Beta for MY KH multichap, and I'm only working on chapter 3. You're still doing a wonderful job with descriptions and dialogue, and the plot--however cliched--is brilliantly executed. I can't wait to see what happens next. ;)

--EYEStoLIE

Zomg. This reminds me of the story "What I did for Love" well, the parents beating up Kairi, that's what was similar but other than that, love it! >D

Argh, I had to squeeze this chapter for the night before I go and do homework because it was simply irresistible to not click the dang "next" button ya know? Excellent story, really, I can't thank you enough for writing such wonderful stories! :D. I really like how Sora seems to show a change of heart, all of a sudden too o_o. Poor Kairi...home doesn't sound to pleasant for her =/. I hope everything works out :)

Too lazy to sign in -.-. But anyway, did I ever tell you how addicting your writing style is? I absolutely love it! D.

This is the first time I've read a Sora and Kairi fanfic (I've always felt strongest for Namine and Roxas, Sora/Kairi never sparked within me), and I love it!
I've always seen suicide as either an ignorant act that only hurt others, or because a person wanted to be rid of the pain all at once rather than gradually. I now have a new perspective for it, thank you 8)

I listened to Goodbye to You, and it was beautiful. It really does fit nicely to Kairi's situation (and I'm glad Sora saved her just in time too.) I wish I had someone like Sora in my life, but then again, everyone does T~T

I'll admit, I was really sad to see that Namine and Roxas wasn't in here, but I can't complain XDD

I can't wait for the next chappie, Sora and Kairi are getting closer and closer 8)

To answer this chapter's question, it's very difficult since I have a lot of different songs I like. But ONE of the songs I would choose would be Make a Wish/Chiisaki Mono by Cindy Mizelle/Asuca Hayashi (English/Japanese song mixed). It's a very deep song and full of hope. And it's from Pokemon, which I of course just love :3

Well to wrap things up so I don't make this review any longer... I'll be waiting for the next update! (As well as Deja Blue... hehe.) And I'm going to read your other SoKai story, the one with Roxi and Nami in it as well 8)

this is a brilliant story i love it i think you should finish it i know i'll be waiting for the next chapter

What is this, the third kh story of yours that i've read? yeah i think so. Why are they all SO GOOD?!? I don't even know which one i want to be updated next. heck, i'm not sure i even CARE...

just one song? T.T hmm...something classical or with a sweet guitar solo. cause i can sing all my favorite pop songs even if i cant really listen to them XD

yay! soraxkairi Forever! i love this so much! please please please update soon!

oh wow!
i lovelovelove this so much
i can't even explain it with words <3
please update soon, i love your characterization
of these two n_n

~nora

Okay, i'm officially addicted to this fic =P It's amazing, and i can't wait for the next update!

Wow, two reviews in one day. You're really working me to death =P (hehe jk...supposed to be a joke <<; ) I'm honestly shocked. I don't know what to expect anymore, this doesn't follow what i've learned to expect to come next in a story. I'm excited about it though x3

But you know you've found a good story when you walk away and then have to remind yourself that you're not mute =P

Okay, so usually I'm not one to review just cuz the art of a good review is dead (yes, i am one of those people that have been around long enough to see the rise and fall of the reviewing era) and i'm not good at this. But your story really surprised me. Usually, the story ends here. Boy girl meet, boy picks on girl, girl has troubled past, he finds out and backs off, abusive step dad attacks, boy shows up at crime scene, they make up, end up going out, yay happy ending story. (Not to make yours sound cliche, I don't mean to do that. Yours is really different. The mute part makes it much more interesting.) But you're carrying on with the story. First of all, I'll say I'm impressed, most people won't carry it on, they just end it here. Second off, this is the first story i've found in a good while with some originality. I was beginning to lose hope =P But, point is, It's a really great story, and i just had to say i'm glad to see someone finally carrying it on past that and tweaking the usual ending. And for some originality. It's a good story, and I'm excited to go on to the next chapter. I only wish i'd found it sooner.

Lol wow that is a lot of Sora's to deal with. But I personal love the cold blooded assassin very much. Thanks for another great chapter!

Wow.
It had been such a long time since I read your stories that I had forgotten just how amazing of a writer you are.
I loved the SoraxKairi bit there. It was really sweet :)