Sigh. Seems kinda like a theme song for me and Dave. It's wonderful tho!! Great job!

Awesome. Kinda short tho. I have no idea how im signed in on here cuz the logins not working right.

My bunny rabbit says your good.
I'll take his word on it.

Love... Human and... Vamp? or just immortal? I think vamp. Anyway, I like it. Did the vamp love the human? if so, did the human love the vamp so much they let the vamp change them? " You aren't mine to have and yet you let me keep you.. Forever" Hm... Interesting. You should write riddles.

Wow, I really liked this Marissa, it was soo cool! It was a really neat poem...loved the transitions o0o0o!! I envy it!!
Keep Writing,
Lauren