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| MarineFlyer86 2005-10-17 ch 1, | abuseCute story but you should write another chaper. |
| Shadowface 2004-11-01 ch 1, | abuseI'm currently re-reading you stories, cause the last time I read them was last December, and that was before I reveiwed. I love this one (it has a cool ending) Write more please! |
| ArielleDeLA 2004-07-15 ch 1, | abuseAw. I like that fic. Thats one of the few really greaat RoLo fics out there. |
| fan 2004-03-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseBeautiful, just simply and overwhelmingly beautiful! |
| Fred God of 2004-03-07 ch 1, | abuseAhh cuteness. very sweet Logan ro bonding. pretty good. |
| Anon 2004-02-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis made me sigh. I liked it a lot! |
| IMHO Nienna 2004-02-25 ch 1, | abuseIf it means anything I think this was a really sweet story. |
| Saki 2004-02-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseLovely, adorable story. I've read and enjoyed this story at the RoLo Realm, but I just had to review here. Excellent work. |
| Angel Of The Heart 2004-02-23 ch 1, | abuseVery nice story! It was so pretty and I LOVE snow! ^_^ |
| Viral 2004-02-22 ch 1, | abuseDarlin, you never cease to amaze me with your skillful writing and ideas. I especially liked the way you could dwell on one single thing as simple as snowfall and create an entire tale. And writing the ignorant Ororo who doesn't know her potential is fun, isn't it? Thanks for a good bedtime story! |
| Isis Aurora Tomoe 2004-02-22 ch 1, | abuseBroo-tiful, dear, just broo-tiful. It made me sort of wish for snow, though being in Maryland, I've seen plenty. You have such a way with your words and setting scenes that the reader finds themself in the story, dancing with Ororo, feeling Logan's amazement, or Scott's astonishment (giggle) I applaud you on a one-shot well done. |
| skyz 2004-02-22 ch 1, | abuseI really think you captured what it must have been like for someone like Storm to come here and be assaulted by everything. I really enjoyed that she was so moved and enthralled by the snow. I also liked how Logan found pleasure in simply seeing her enjoyment of such a mundane thing to those who haven't had the thrill of seeing snow or other things like that. Great job. I really liked this story. |