Reviews for Eien Ni Nakunatta Shunkan

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thereonlyonephoenix 2008-03-25 ch 1, anon.	abuseso, are you never gonna update this story? it's too good to leave it as it is...
Susurrous 2008-01-21 ch 24,	abusehey, i read your story on media miner...and i have to say i am ADDICTED. i love your story, especially the angst at the beginning :D i love totosai in this fic too - he's so nice to rin-chan! But WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU? I'm writing in the year 2008, and let's see...your last update was...2005? that's three years! ah! i can't stand this anymore! and by the way, a suggestion - if you're going to use japanese words, please include an english translation - i see that you have for the earlier chappies, but for the later ones, i have NO idea what you're talking about without having to scroll all the way to the bottom, and then trying to find my place again. Although i like your writing style and all, i would suggest you please either make the chapters shorter, or update more often (like, within a range of a month per update, not a couple years? it loses people's interest when stories are updated once every year or so)
Yuki 2007-12-13 ch 24, anon.	abusei love this story and i hope you update soon. the relationship between rin and sesshoumaru is amazing and the last two chapters were so good please you have to update soon.
Remyhairtoday 2007-11-12 ch 22, anon.	abuseI LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE (get the point?) this story! Just wish it was finished! not many that i just want to know how it turns out so much! This one completely has my attention and definitely is locked into my favorites on my webbrowser! hopefully one day you will have time to finish it!
GreaterBeast-Xellas 2007-11-06 ch 24,	abuseUpdate pweese
Luinuial 2007-10-23 ch 15,	abuseOh my god. This has to be the best piece of InuYasha fanfiction I've ever read. I absolutely love the idea of Sessh and Rin as a pair and you have managed to capture Sesshomaru so wonderfully. He is very in character and the story is believable. He is so complex and you've captured him perfectly!
Empathic Slytherin 2007-10-12 ch 24,	abuseim crying right now, and i want rin and sesshoumaru back together. i want sesshoumaru get his head out of his ** and ask her to marry him! dammit!
restive silence 2007-10-04 ch 24,	abuseGah!! I am so sad! I didn't realize this story wasn't really being updated anymore and just read all of it... :( It is so good! I'm not a big fan of the Inuyasha/Kagome parts, but the rest of the story rocks. Maybe one day you will write more... is hopeful
B 2007-09-07 ch 24, anon.	abuseYour story kept me absolutely on edge...I kept wondering what would happen next... Please Please Please Please kept writng this story. I am so upset that there isn't more chapters...You write absolutely GREAT! Keep writing, and please finish this story...
mimoris 2007-08-25 ch 24, anon.	abuseplz updait its been two years !
Hinatinha 2007-08-16 ch 1,	abuseI love'it. Please, update soon!
Junkie713 2007-07-19 ch 24, anon.	abuseOk I only found one flaw - a personal first for for me - your CAPPING WORDS FOR EMPHASIS has a tendancy to put emphasis on the wrong word, and your should probably use bold or italics for that, and caps really rarely. CAPS stop the flow of the story in a way i don't think you want. But anyway. I love it. But for the love of god please finish it. I can't enjoy any other inuyasha fics properly till i get a proper ending for this fic. Though I suppose that's what I get for not working my way up to the best, rather than starting with it like i did. Anyway, FINISH IT GOD DAMN IT! :)
Warrior of the Waters 2007-06-24 ch 24,	abuseOMFG SESSHOUMARU WHAT THE F* HELL IS THE MATTER WITH YOU! YOU PIECE OF **! OPEN YOUR EYES AND SEE WHAT YOU'RE DOING TO POOR RIN WHO LOVED YOU AND STILL DOES LOVE YOU!! you're a really great author! i have 2 suggestions: 1) please don't have the chapters SO frickin long!! 2) Have Rin try to commit suicide and then we'll see how Sesshoumaru reacts. Please update soon!!
Warrior of the Waters 2007-06-24 ch 23,	abuseSo did Kagura and Sess really get together when Rin was away? And I don't really understand when Rin suddenly got so out-of-character. Was that purposefully or unintentionally for her part?
rockstar 2007-06-24 ch 22, anon.	abuseWTF SESSHOMARU WHAT THE HELL IS YOUR PROBLEM?! u got serious problems, dude. you would actually choose pride over true love. tsk tsk tsk WHY DID YOU MAKE KIKYOU THE BAD GUY IN THIS CHAPPY?! SHE'S THE AWESOMEST PRIESTESS EVER!! i hope kagura's out of this fic soon

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