so...I'm guessing this one's abandoned. o well, it was a very good twelve chapters, thanks for writing it.

Aw, heartbreak. Poor Will. And I agree with DOcD. Do finish this up. And maybe you can find him a new lady.

I know it's been so long since you last updated this story, but really, it should have a proper ending! I started reading it today because it was suggested by a reviewer (Smithy, I believe), and I can honestly say I see what they mean by how awesome this story is. Very emotional, very original, and now, very much needing an update.

Hopefully, your muses will begin to help you along soon, and we may yet have a great story on our hands. :)

Wow, this is one heck of a story to leave hanging. Is there ever going to be more about what happened to Norrington? (I'm starting to like the sod here, and that's saying a lot.)

And who's this fellow stalking Will? I have an idea, but I'd like to see if my thoughts are confirmed. That and I'd like to see him strung up by the one and only Captain Sparrow. Man deserves it compeletely.

Thanks for the good read! ^_^

His Lordship William Hetherington? Wow!

This is so sad. I usually don't like these 'widowed Will' stories, but this shows him with such pain and agony. I was sobbing with him. And he is so right. He'd never hurt her. Also, I like Groves. I hope they show more of Mr. Groves in the second one. Yay, Groves!

Serial psycho! Dang, this is ANGSTY... but I like it. Killing Norrington and Matilda and Elizabeth... This guy's insane. I noticed that the last time you updated was back in May. Planning on updating soon? It's August. (Hint, Hint.)

I like your characterization. It's good. I feel so bad for Will and, now that I've thought about it, Governor Swann- he just lost his daughter and now his son-in-law is leaving with his baby grandson. He's gonna be all alone... You're not going to kill him too, are you?

Anyway, I'm done.

Jack E.

You killed Norrington... Weep.

I like the story, and you researched. Hurrah! It's nice to see someone else actually research history and such for a story. Good job, keep writing. Now, I'll go weep for Norrington.

-Kiki

Wow! This is really a great story. Update soon!

I had to go back to this chapter... PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I'M GOING MAD WITH ANTICIPATION! WHAT HAPPENS TO NORRINGTON? BEN? WILL?
Legolas-gurl88

This has been a tremendous story so far. so sad with will. I cant wait for the rest so update soon please

Omg!! What's going to happen next? Please, please update soon.

FalconWing.

*GASP!* No! Evil! So, who will it be next, Jack? Please update soon!

+_+ Inu Lover

*Squeak* Well, that's a cliffhanger and a half! I've had this bookmarked for a while but have only just got around to reading. Very good, full of tension and mystery. I hope the murderer gets caught and Will gets to live with the baby happily.

Ya know, your doing a good job of killing off all the main characters. Fisrt Elizabeth, then Norrington... who's next, Governor Swann!??
Or maybe, Jack himself... Na, you'd get a huge angrey mob after you, branishing pitchforks and lit tourches.

The story's good, but Will as an English Lord?!! Didn't see that one comming, not by a long shot. That hunchmen's a real sicko, hope you get Jack or Will to kill him. I've read a lot of stories were they have "blood and guts" galore, but the scene you discribed, with the brains, guts and heart, was so good, it almost made me sick, physicaly. Just.. keep it to a minimum... please...

The emoutional distrest and torment, Will is going though about Elizabeth, is perfect, just like I bet it would be for the movie, and you've manage to capture that little 'something' about Jack that makes him so "special".

That's all folks,
Do keep writing, I want to know what happens,
Thanks,
Astro-Sagi