You need to re-upload this and last chapter. Your dialog and formatting got ruined. It's horrible to read.

in chapter 11, showown, Deborah found out that she was being followed, when she ran inside, she told her mother what had happend. Marry got up because she heard the dog barking constantly. Marry told Deborah to go and get a musket and load it up, while she was doing that, Marry herself got a musket and started to load the one she had in her hand. Dan said that

Out of many AUs of the saga, this is one of the best!

Love this story. I hope inspiration strikes and you come back to it. It's terrific and I would love to see it completed.

This is a very cool story. It's a pity that it seems to be abandoned. I really enjoyed reading this version of Anakin/Vader's return to the light and would love to see where you'd go with it.

this story is freaking amazing! i really love the plot

Ooooh cliffy.

i REALLY love tgis story! i've already read the whole thing twice, and really wish there was more of it!

LOVE THE STORY! it has vader turning back to anakin earlier, and it aviods the cliches in those stories! i am impressed ;) keep up the amazing writing and i look forward to reading more

Ah! That's it? I stumbled upon this through someone's favorites and got instantly draw in. This is one of the best Vader redemption stories out there. It took me a second to catch on to the publish date to realize just why it wasn't canon. Quite an interesting back story you've created. I really think you should return to it. You've almost completely covered ROTJ!

I liked the first fifteen chapters, but the lack of quotation marks in this one makes it extremely unpleasant to read.

Yes! I love Vader redemption stories! But you haven't updated in forever! Don't give up on this story! UPDATE SOON!

I'm guessing from the fact that this fic has not been updated since '06 that this fic won't be continued?

I do hope it will be continued though. It is simply too good for it not to be.

Really too bad you did not finish the story :(

Please for the love of the gods, finish this. This is one of the best stories that I have ever read. I have just found this story, and went on a bender reading it. Finding out that Padme was on Nar Shaddaa, at the same time as Anakin/Vader, was surprising. I was on pins and needles to see if they found each other. Padme's reaction was a given, but I am hoping that they get back together eventually. Thank you again for an absolutely wonderful story so far. Here's hoping it will be finished. And on a final note are there any possible sequels in store for this story?