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So-joo
2006-12-02 . chapter 1
Yay for ANGST!! XD

Me: *Glomps Shika*

Shikamaru: GERROFF ME YOU TROUBLESOME WOMAN!!

Me: *insane laughter*

You: O.o
CuteCrittersGang
2006-03-08 . chapter 1
Tom: (sobs) POOR SHIKAMARU! All your teammates are DEAD! (glomps)

Shikamaru: Get off me, you strange rabid squirrel! You're so troublesome! They didn't die, they're right over there!

Chouji: (chomps on a bag of chips and blinks)

Ino: There's no way I'd die before Forehead-girl!

Sakura: (appears suddenly) OH YEAH?! (starts a cat fight)

Asuma: (twitch) I'm not seeing any of this. (walks away)

Shikamaru: SEE?!

Tom: (blinks) Well, it was a fantastic one-shot anyways. Yay for angst! (sobs) POOR SHIKA!

Shikamaru: (sigh) How troublesome.

*Tom*
Mikomi no Tsuioku
2006-02-17 . chapter 1
ToT. Why Shikamaru, Why?! So sad... almost has me crying... I guess even a happy-fic writter has a little angst...*sniffles* Saya.
-cassy
M. Life
2005-03-22 . chapter 1
Painful. In the good way.
doranobaka
2004-09-29 . chapter 1
Ow. Poor Shikamaru. :( Beautifully written. It definitely tugged at my heart strings. >.>
weirddramagirl
2004-07-06 . chapter 1
sad but beautiful... I also read all of Between last night on the other site and I really enjoyed it as well.
aquafina rain
2004-03-31 . chapter 1
Depressing. I loved it. Wonderful job with Shika-angst.
PikkaZipper
2004-02-28 . chapter 1
Aww... that was so sad! But still good, I really felt something while reading.
Mango13
2004-02-24 . chapter 1
Aw Shika, it ain't your fault! I love the greasy little slimeball too, he's just so...so
laid back.
Oh, and are you REALLY sure that Shika's teammates died?
*thumbs through latest Weekly Jump Naruto chapters from Japan*
*evil cackle*
ccs_lover
2004-02-23 . chapter 1
that was good even though it was short! *thumbs up!*
Hyper-Sloth
2004-02-23 . chapter 1
Truly beautifully written. *sniff* lol, very sad, poor Shikamaru! He's my second fave Naruto character, and I loved how you portrayed him. It was very pretty, and poetic, it really kicked ass!
*HyperSloth*
>_
2004-02-23 . chapter 1
*SOB* no
ino WILL get better and perform as a kickass ninja and save shika! yes! yes!
Alriadne
2004-02-23 . chapter 1
Shikamaru is my fav character as well. I guess the reason we all like him so much is because he's so easy to relate to. He's lazy, which is most people, he doesn't live up to his potential, who hasn't heard the phrase "Has potential but won't apply themself"? He's underapprciated. Huh, sorry for the rabbling. It was a relaly good story, keep it up!
DeliciousAmbiguity
2004-02-23 . chapter 1
poor shikamaru XDD someone has to help him out of his depression! who will it be? anyways, continue soon!
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