m good storyy!

It's okay that the chapter was short. Hopefully the next one's much longer! Oh, and... Pinky! =P

good story...nice and fluffy...the way i like my fics...im a such a sap...

GG

Shelinda? that was soo random. anyhow, past that YAY! very funny, and soo adorable! I loved the ending. very simple and clean cut. very good job!

AW! that wasd so cute! I really like this story. It's so fluff-tastic!

hahahaha...I love Gippal's reaction. lol.

i'm putting you on my story alert list. :) i really love this story, so please update soon.

e lyh'd pameaja oui. oui tuh'd cbayg al bhed tu oui? the proper way to say, "i want you to help build" is e fyhd oui RAMB piemt. RAMB not HAMB sheeze. sigh... now that that is out of the way, GREAT WORK, nice story line so far. i was hooked from the start. just... try an al bhed translator site next time. 'k? adios.

Wait so now what? I'm in chapter 14 'Memory' now, but i don't get it...where's the scene where Paine confesses her love for Baralai? My god, what the heck...ok no offense, i really love yer story but, it's just too confusing, i mean the chapters don't match at all!
*deep sigh* really i would fix it for the other readers!
Anyway good job!

wow its realy good.
i wish the story would go on and on.
any way u have a great ending

Aw...

PINKY!

pinky.

This is interesting...

Gippal makes me laugh. And Rikku's doped on morphine. Heehee.

Sorry. That shouldn't be funny.

Update soon, or I will send you a virus! Haha! jk! Actually, I will virtually give you my cold that I recently have, if you don't, soon! ^_^ Just joshing ya! Great Job on the story, keep it up, and Update soon! ^_^

Sweet last chapter! No epiloge?