Heh. *Definitely* limey. I love the stream-of-consciousness style of the start. I like it when people get it right, and you've got Watari's irrevent, slightly cynical tone down very nicely. I would have prefered less of a PWP, but it was alright.

You managed to mix arbitrary sex with an cute, entertaining subject. Although you used one of the most shameless cliches in the book, a 'truth potion'. Heck, I like shameless smut/fluff, so I'll live with it ;). Will be checking out any of your other writings.

Kawaii! I heart Watari Tatsumi! That was adorable, seriously you have to write more about them, you do it so well. I was actually laughing out loud at some points. Okay back to exam studying... ** its in under 3 hours lol.

O_O that was SO hot. lol, i love your writing style. keep it up!

^_~ hence why chocolate is good for you. ah, chocolate.

I really like this story. It's funny and romantic at the same time. Who would've imagined Tsuzuki coming up with such a plot? ^_^

:hearts: fantastic!

O.O!
WAI!! *pounceu!* *hugu!* YOU ARE MY NEW FAVORITEEST PERSON IN THE WHOLE WORLD! Right after my bestfriend and my friend 'Drea who's taking me to Japan with her this summer.
I LOVED THIS FIC! I never thought of 'Tari-chan and 'Sumi-chan together but hm... Perhaps this will give me some inspiration. I've been out of it for a while. ARIGATOU! JA NE!
K. C. =^.^= *Mew!*

aww this is such a cute fic, very well written and edited also. kudos!

Delicious...

Too too too kawaii! Absoulutly adorable!! (go Tsuzuki and Wakaba! the devious little planners). And doesn't it go to show Watari...your bad days can turn out good!

Aw, but PWP's are good things! XD Hurray for Tatsumi/Watari pairings! *glomps Watari* X3 Heh, the best part of the fic is:
Tsuzuki: "Watari, you **!"
Watari: "Shut up, **, it's your fault!"
XD Weo! This is in my faves. Write more Tats/Wat stuffs, 'kay? *glomps you then runs off laughing maniacally* o.O()
¬.¬ Harakiri

omg that was hilarious! this is the very first yami no matsuei fic i've ever read, and i liked it very much. now i'm starting to like the tatsumi x watari pairing thanks to you! XD you seem to have other stories in the same anime as well. i'll hopefully be reviewing them too! :D

The vampire Lestat claims another...
LOL. ^_^ This was amazingly cute, and I love Tatsumi/Watari :D Devious Tsuzuki and Wakaba. I salute them for it. [salutes] The stream-of-consciousness thing was good, gave lots of background so it wasn't completely PWP :D [claps]

NO WONDER!! I seriously liked the story (though I don't remember where I found it), and now I find out it was yours... no wonder I liked it so much! ^^ Your stories are always so sweet and... and... well, just so damn SWEET. Sweeter than chocolate! ;)
"Watari, you **!" "Shut up, **..." just adorable x]

WHAT! No leather pants?? Ah well lemony goodness more then makes up for it [hugs]thank you! [goes to make soup for Watari, broken ankles hurt]

Wow. I can't coherently think of a more appropriate word than...wow. This fic is a perfect example of why you're one of my favorite fanfic authors!