 Kairou Watoshimi 2008-12-12 . chapter 1This made my day!! I love it! |
 KazunaPikachu 2008-07-14 . chapter 1EH! That was hilarious! I loved it ;) Man, i really hate mary-sues. Heck, some ppl even make canon characters mary-sue when it's an AU fic (-.-) So annoying. Anyway, it was really funny. i'm gonna add it to my favs! :3 |
 Miko's Youkai 2008-07-03 . chapter 1That was lovely. |
 Redmage2 2007-02-21 . chapter 1 Beautiful...
Great work--Sesshoumaru-sama, protector of the canon, but only when it affects him! |
 YonderTiger 2006-02-11 . chapter 1That was great! Loved how you made Sesshomaru remain in character! (except for knowing what a Mary-Sue and a canon was) and "water of hell" is a fitting name, I'd say. I really liked this story! |
 Infinity-Nevermore 2005-11-07 . chapter 1That was awesome! There is still hope for this fandom. Me and a friend were discussing ideas like this, but since you already did a Mary-Sue, we'll have to do someone else. Do you mind if I do a similar story? |
 Ikaaro 2005-07-31 . chapter 1Heehee! ^.^ I had fun reading this! Silly Mary-Sue, thinking he'd love you. She obviously didn't stalk him enough to know *sigh*
A coupla phrases seemed OOC for Sesshoumaru but other than that, excellent job ^^ |
 xkumaxchanx 2005-06-20 . chapter 1Heehee. Love the Mary-Sues, but hate 'em at the same time. This was a rather funny-for-no-reason idea. I still like it. |
 Lucinda the Maid 2005-05-22 . chapter 1Great, great, great! Love the title! And Fluffy stayed in character, too. But how did he know what "canon" was... ah, well. At least he decapitated "Water of Hell" in the end--a proper punishment for any Mary Sue, might I add. The dialogue between the two main characters was done very well, and your unique writing style helped make the whole bloody mess better than it was before! (Eh... I mean that in the best way possible.) All Mary Sue authors should read this fic, just to see the fate that could potentially befall their *ahem* "original" characters. Nicely done. Now get back to "The Lies that Bind"! Honestly, TWO MONTHS without an update?! I can hardly take it anymore! *starts foaming at the mouth, makes Tsukatta no Jigoku explode* Eh... whoops... |
 Fledgling 2005-01-28 . chapter 1That was hilarious...in a..bloody sort of way. And I DEFINITELY agree with your Mary Sue. I read another story a while ago that was just like that, in fact and...ugh. I stopped as soon as I realized what the content was like. Nicely done; Sesshomaru stayed in character! |
 Magic-on-the-Wind 2004-11-14 . chapter 1Bwahahaha. Down with the Mary-Sue.
At last, a fic with Sesshomaru in character. This is exellent. |
 Unknown Fool 2004-10-27 . chapter 1I know I sound very very very very naive, but what is a Mary-Sue? I have an idea that it's someone that the author created for their one story to fall in love with a character, mainly a bishie. Am I right? |
 Andy Quinn 2004-10-23 . chapter 1Oh, man. That was precious. *wipes eyes* All hail the bloody Sesshy-ness. And dude, you read MT? We must gang up on Kyoko, yes? ^_^;; |
 Kainaku Hotaru 2004-10-21 . chapter 1Very nice. I love the detailing.
I must admit though... I am a major guilty party. I have a lot of Mary-Sue fics... In fact, all of them are... ^^;;
Still, the bashing is fun and hilarious. XDD |
 jordazed 2004-10-19 . chapter 1*cracks up* |