 Twilightlover 2009-03-19 . chapter 6 I loved that story! it was awsome! you should write more awsome storys please! I'll read them! |
 CorrectionPolice 2005-02-18 . chapter 2 Great Story!
Mausoleum not moselium |
 Falcon Horus 2004-10-19 . chapter 6I think this is way cool!! Really liked this one. Thank you!
Greetz ;) |
 Matthew Blackheart 2004-09-05 . chapter 6awesome |
 silver emerald eyes 2004-05-24 . chapter 6*sighs deeply* I LOVED IT! ^_^ I really like the idea and it was well written! ^_~ It's a good read *grin* Great job! *thumbs up* |
 VampyricAngel 2004-05-23 . chapter 1I know I am doing this backwards, but with all my work I am doing on my fics, I have been quite busy.. Anyways, I really loved this chapter, loved the chemistry developing between Chris and Selene. Please keep on writing!! I greatly encourage you to continue!! If you need anything at all just hiss. |
 VampyricAngel 2004-05-23 . chapter 6This last chapter was awesome! I sure hope you keep writing! I love how you bonded Selene and Chris together! If you ever need anything, just give me a hiss. |
 Deep Damnation 2004-05-02 . chapter 4OMG i hate cliffhangers!! looking forward to find out what happens! Update soon, Best Wishes, Northen Lady x |
 silver emerald eyes 2004-04-19 . chapter 4i love it! it's unique...post the *sniff* last chap soon.. :] |
 FlitShadowflame 2004-03-26 . chapter 3...
that's depressing. |
 pike 2004-03-23 . chapter 1 that's kinda mean. is it just me or does Devon make no sense. keep updating. |
 Alesford 2004-03-19 . chapter 3Good plot, good start. Just learn how to re-read (wow, I need to take my own advice) and spell correctly. You use the wrong words in places and use different names. You always seem to use "the lady vampire" which gets boring. Also, learn how to use commas, it would make reading so much easier and less distracting. Other wise, nice job so far. |
 TheMoosey 2004-03-16 . chapter 3HI...ok i got kind of confused in this chapter...maybe it was becuase i was reading too fast because i was excited to have a new chapter, but i'm really getting sucked into your story...keep going
Moose/ vampireuntr00/ lycan65 |
 xXxCrimsonTearsxXx 2004-03-14 . chapter 2Awesome...
Please update soon i've been waiting! |
 xXxCrimsonTearsxXx 2004-03-08 . chapter 1Awesome really cute, in a grusome way |