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evil-princez85
2004-08-12
ch 1,
abuseat the beginning i was sad.. coz they all thought each other was dead... but smiling at the end coz they were happy

love ur work...hope to be hearing more from u soon

jane w
Emsta
2004-03-23
ch 1,
abusei LOVE the bit about the ears! funny!
TruthFreedomBeautyLove
2004-03-04
ch 1,
abuseAww..I like it! :)
Cept one thing..you mention one of the twin's names as Emily but then later you call her Emma..just a technical thing, I really like your story and hope your planning more!
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