i really like your story i hope theres a fourth book

Great Story but kinda stunk when you had the 2 OC's die...

I loved it, i wa wondering if you could send me a link to book 3, i can't get to it. Thank you

I liked this book a lot! great job!

Akimichi techniques:Bubbun Baikai no jutsu(Partial doubvle size technique)
Ballistic water cannon(filler):chouji driniks up alot of water , jumps int thwe air does double size and charges at the opponents
2)dance of the cresent moon i dunno the jap version

"It seemed he could spray his blood from his Chakra Points, it seemed the guy could automatically make new blood in his body." lol that would make a good blood donor. cant wait until i finish this book and start on book 3 keep posting!

Finished this one too!! On to the next book!! Pairings ahoy!!

O YEA! GO NARUTO GO NARUTO GO GO!

wow, great battle, best i've seen, hope Naruto can kick her **!!

lol, Shikamaru is stupid in this fic, lol

OMG Naruto is so stupid, lol, lmfao!

This sucks!

very good story!

*That Doroi guy died in the fight with Orochimaru early, then came back later as if nothing had happened.
*Again you used out of place settings a couple times in the fights, and neglected the effect of collateral damage.
*The end scene with the Hyuugas might be better if we knew how many were actually left after the massacre from book one.
*Naruto & co. regained their personalities too easily.
*The large fights for the first couple secret scrolls were unnecessary since, ninjitsu is as much as about stealth as about force. Plus if the scrolls were THAT valuable, why didn't the kages make back-up copies of them?
*All this aside, you have kept my interest enough for me to read book 3.

Great stories, I've read both of them. Surprising that you only got 445 reviews. When is the third book coming out? WRITE FAST FAST FAST