I like it...

NICE! there arent many touji/hikari fics and it makes me so sad coz i love that pairing! your fic was great! i love that song and it fits nicely! but it was too short and hanging! why not write some more? a sequel perhaps? that would be better! :D

This songfic is very different from the Touji/Hikari ones that I've been reading lately. It was well written and the song matches it quite well. Fine work indeed Write on
-Epicentre

What, you only made one Chapter of a story to THE GREATEST Eva pairing ever? Plus it was this good?
(Cries like a baby)
But it was so sweet. Touji and Hikari make the greatest coupling ever, no matter what! I do hope to see more T/H stories like this in the future, because they are what make the pairing so official, when the series only disregarded the two.
TOUJI/HIKARI Forever!

Mein Gott!

This has got to be one of the best songfics I've ever read! Honest to [insert Deity of Choice]!

Aww, so lovely! Nice song, nice fic... but kinda unfinished though. Anyway, loved it!

Pretty good... You could have made an 2'nd chapter on this. would have enjoyed it!

I never read a Touji/ Hikari fic. If they're anything like this, then they should make more. Good work.

that was vary good.

Wow... this is pretty cool... I don't watch NGE but I like it anyway. :-)

Go karou!

Awww, that was so sweet! I loved it, you should really write a sequel to this, I'm curious to see what happens to them.

hey, I could've sworn I reveiwed this the first time I read it but...anyways. This moved me, it was that good. No idea about the song though, but I read it like a poem, so it worked. I doubt Hikari's father would do that, but given the fac that he's more obscure than other characters, I'll give ya that. Great little piece here.

Shin

Beautiful

very nice story, its not like the other ones where they just meet and make out

Awww...thats a cute fic. I really liked that. Well written and with a good premise. Good stuff ;)