Add another chapter, for this story has its good points

Very good! You packed a lot of feeling and characterization into a short piece. I hope you're writing more Luke/Vader stories.

[shakes head] Okay…

I don't get the "more at peace with his life", but I enjoyed the read.

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WOW! Great story! I loved the ending, it fit perfectly. And the 'Son of the Son of Suns' was great! Keep up the good work!

Beautiful. That was really magical. I know, and have known for quite a few years, that Vader knew all along about Luke's existance. Mara mentioned it briefly to Luke in one of the novels, and rumors have pointed out that Anakin knew Padme was pregnant! So I really appreciate this story. Well done,

Brilliant story. I love your writng style- your details, your charcterizations. Luke/Vader fics are always wonderful to read, but this was an exceptional piece. Your plot was well chosen and interesting. Great job!