 Kin'ni 2004-02-27 . chapter 1Hahaha...you were right. I WAS one of those who thought it was another angsty-Nokoru-is-a-basketcase fics. Not that I'd mind if it were, really...I liked this just as much as I liked How Things Change and Living With Suoh. I really like how you play around with their characters. Very intuitive and very intellectual, at the same time, they never fail to tug at the readers' heartstrings. However, I don't know if I've already said this when I reviewed before, you seem to have some very minor grammatical errors...or typos that can be overlooked by the minor reader (heheh...) but can be pinpointed by the more critical eye. So, to make an already good fic even better, it would do good to smoothen things out, ne? Right. Okay, if you need help, I'm free...Enough said, then. Ja ne! ^_~ |