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Reviews for: Day at the Tracks
James Birdsong
2009-09-16 . chapter 1
Really good fic ^_^
GSYH
2005-05-28 . chapter 1
I didn't get the story as I was reading it, what Nokoru has a gambling problem? I mean it didn't sound like a crack fic in which this would make sense. Then the ending came and everything fell into place. Great story!
Syaoran-Lover
2004-03-14 . chapter 1
Great fic! ^^
I liked it a lot! ^^
Yey! Nokoru knew all along, and I kinda thought he would say something interesting outside the board room. ^^
VERY GOOD! ^^
re weird
2004-03-03 . chapter 1
Interesting fic1 Very good ending.^_^
Kat R. Fair
2004-02-28 . chapter 1
I like the word 'flounced' too! I thought it was great! but yes I did think it was a 'Nokoru has mental problems' fic, and that turned me off originally but as it progressed it got really good! Akira was so cute at the Beginning ^^!
Kin'ni
2004-02-27 . chapter 1
Hahaha...you were right. I WAS one of those who thought it was another angsty-Nokoru-is-a-basketcase fics. Not that I'd mind if it were, really...I liked this just as much as I liked How Things Change and Living With Suoh. I really like how you play around with their characters. Very intuitive and very intellectual, at the same time, they never fail to tug at the readers' heartstrings. However, I don't know if I've already said this when I reviewed before, you seem to have some very minor grammatical errors...or typos that can be overlooked by the minor reader (heheh...) but can be pinpointed by the more critical eye. So, to make an already good fic even better, it would do good to smoothen things out, ne? Right. Okay, if you need help, I'm free...Enough said, then. Ja ne! ^_~
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