very nice story, dark but leaves one wondering about the light to come

This was interesting. Sad that you abandoned it would've liked to know the resolution.

You are a STINKER! You wrote all these neat stories and then just let them starve! SHAME ON YOU!

Nice story. Update, please.

How do i keep missing this stuff? How come I have to nearly trip over your fics to find them? I was resarching fics added 90 PAGES back, and found this one. By you.

And of course, I loved it.

Something tells me it'd be too much to ask for a continuance, but that's ok. You've got Silk going, so I'll have to be content with.

Pretty good AU story, although it has some errors. I take it hot water doesn't work anymore?

AAW-for Ranma and :-) -for Ryoga! -ko

I dont see the point to this story. what is happening? Just killing off every character is no fun.

Hm... Confusing, yet quite interesting at the same time... I like it! Two questions. One, why IS every one ranma knows dying. Second question, will he, or she if that's now the proper pronoun... ever run into the Tendo's or anyone else on the Nemerian Wrecking Crew? I'll have to watch this one...
Shade and sweet water!
-Der Niabs

The story has a lot of potential but I feel for the three chapters you rushed through them to quickly but besides that it was a decent read
Oh yeah if your interested I posted a new chapter of Return of the Phoenix

Nice try, but your attempt to be evocative is sorely undercut by egregious spelling errors. You consistently missuse 'there', 'their','they're', 'your', and 'you're' Your pluralization is wrong more oftent then not. And "gwafaa"? Perhaps you mean 'guffaw'? 'Prologe'? 'increadible'? It verges on the inexcusable.
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Sorry if this sounds like nitpicking, but details count. You should work on this stuff until you get it right. Your overall conception is meaningless if you can't get the details right, because your readers won't want to continue.
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I hope you don't consider this a flame, I just get annoyed when I see wasted potential. This could be really good if you'd just invest the effort to fix it.

I have to see where you take this, it is 'different', very much so. Why so much death to those associated with Ranma?

huh?

WAAHH! RYOGA DIED!
*Sniff*
Anyway, now that you've got a real plot going, you absolutely HAVE to keep going!
LATER

keep the updates comin, it might turn out good. Make Nodoka accept that ranma is her daughter not her son anymore.