Mysteriana 2008-05-30 . chapter 18 All I can say is that you have an incredible gift. If you can find such wonderful stories to share about preexisting characters, you can work such magic with your own creations.
For the sake of all those who love to read, especially fantasy/romance stories, PLEASE continue to write. You have a great talent. Your stories capture all of the emotions, details and characters in such a way, you can't help but be drawn in, and hunger for more. Your stories definately have bittersweet endings. Sweet in that the stories make you feel good when it's over. Bitter because now there is no more to read.
Please keep up the excellent work. I very much hope to see you as a published writer someday! When you do, please let everyone on this site know. You already have a ready, willing and able fanbase! |
yugismpuzzle 2007-06-11 . chapter 18 Aw...how cute! I liked this story a lot, and I'm not normally a fan of Inu fics. the characters stayed fairly true and the story was believable. I love Destiny! I just want to hug her!
Great job!!
Yugismpuzzle |
Angel of Atonement 2005-12-06 . chapter 18As I said about its first part I read this a while ago and am glad to have found the chance to review.
This continuation past the main quest of the Inuyasha series was very well thought out and executed, just like its predecessor. You elegantly wrapped up just about every possible loose end but did it in a believable and very moving way. My only complaint would be at one point between chapters describing the huge battle where I couldn't see a nice transition at the beginning of the next chapter, which left me a little confused at first. I don't know if you've fixed that already, though.
The identity of Destiny and her explanation was not bad at all. I really liked it. A LOT. I don't think the two stories you came up with could be improved in any way, though I'm sure you yourself could do it if you wanted to.
Once again, thank you very much for this story, and good luck in all your endeavours. |
dizappearingirl 2005-11-03 . chapter 18~silence~
~more silence~
OH. MY. GOODNESS. thats all you can say. OHMYGOODNESS! WOW and AH!
That was...its hard to describe! awesome! wonderful! SO WONDERFUL! and i LOVED how it ended and i-ah- i JUST LOVED IT! ohmygoodness that was so cool!
ACK! i dont know what to say! O_O im still at lost, but. one thing i can say:
there are stories that make you smile contentedly after you finish them. others make you laugh at the end. others make you wonder when the sequel will come out-what will happen next.
BUT FEW-a very rare few- have that feeling at the end when you sit in you seat in shock. you cant describe it and you cant talk about it-its too deep and too big for you concious mind. Its too WONDER-ful, AWE-some, to be put in to words.
That is your story.
^_^ i applaude you. |
Simonkal of Inuy 2005-10-31 . chapter 18Exceptional!! |
frostyshake 2005-10-29 . chapter 1 Wow that was great. I'm guessing that was the end? Or are you going to write an epilogue? I just loved this story. |
Dragon Man 180 2005-10-27 . chapter 18Oh yeah, they finally kissed and admitted they loved one another. Horaay, Sakura is dead and dusted, Sesshy lives, and Kagome can travel through the well again! Everything is right in the world! But did Destiny come from the Feudal era's future or a different reality? |
dizappearingirl 2005-07-22 . chapter 170_0
WOW!
oh my goodness. that was very good. twas interesting and slightly disturbing, but lovely
^_^update soon |
Simonkal of Inuy 2005-07-20 . chapter 17I really enjoyed this chapter...You are truely a diamond in the rough, and I say that because I can't believe this story has not gotten more reviews. I hope this isn't the end, because it sounds like another jewel was created, and what's up with Sesshomaru is it true? I don't think it will be that simple, but that was not something that I expected at all, like I said awesome chapter...Please update when possible |
Atlanta-avalon1.1 2005-07-18 . chapter 17Wow... just wow... what happens now? |
Dragon Man 180 2005-07-18 . chapter 17Heh, the other lords are wrong in assuming Sesshy loves Kagome, the only human he could fall for right now is Rin, and she's young enough now that she's more like a daughter to him. |
Galandria the Vampire Queen 2005-06-28 . chapter 16that was awesome
sorry i forgot about this fic
please update soon |
Simonkal of Inuy 2005-06-28 . chapter 16Wow that update was well worth the wait...this story has me begging for a happy ending, but some how I don't think it's gonna happen, how can it...Inuy and Kagome can't be together, can they? Since Inuy has change into a full demon he can't be changed back, can he? Kagome has accepted the fact that Inuy didn't choose her, but by keeping her there didn't he choose her? I thought a couple of chapters back it said something the lead to the fact the Destiny was Inuy and Kagome daughter, was I mistaken? What's up with Sesshy's mom doesn't she know that Inuy is the one that's in love with Kagome not Sesshy, or will it be brought to her attention in the last chapter? God, I just want that sadistic ** to die, No matter who whens the war...wow you really absorb your readers into your story line I just wish your updates didn't take so long, but I understand..Perfection is something you have to work at. So keep up the good work!! |
dizappearingirl 2005-06-27 . chapter 16MOAN! (i cant write it out so just know i am moaning over this...) URG! so much angsT~!
Will it ever stop?
Tis really good tho! PLZ update when you can, i want to read more soon! |
Dragon Man 180 2005-06-22 . chapter 16Argh, I wish Sesshomaru had killed Sakura long ago, and Rashu had never come to the village. |