eyelessinsomniac 2008-02-05 . chapter 1That's very clever. |
Jewelled-Wolf 2007-07-02 . chapter 1 Now that is something I haven't seen before. I love it, the imagery and thought in the story. And a very nice hidden message. Awesome work! |
anonymous 2007-02-01 . chapter 2 Fantastic and very clever! I tried reading the first letter of every paragraph but that didn't make sense. Ah well almost got it! |
Martian Aries 2006-05-10 . chapter 1Clever! Oh, so very clever. Wow. Hehehe. I'd like this if only because of the hidden message, but it's well-written, too. Splendid imagery, a bleak but accurate characterization of Sands. I adore the twist at the end, too, and the last line... chilling. I think I'm gonna put this on 'Mexico and Mariachis'. Keep up the good work! |
Tiggy Malvern 2006-05-07 . chapter 1Nicely done - it's well written, with a loud Sands attitude, and it stands strongly enough as its own thing, even without the little trick. |
Jac (aka Sandsagent) 2006-05-02 . chapter 1 i've reviewed before and I have to say I never worked out the riddle untill you gave the hint, thank you very much that is very clever my dear and i'll mention again great piece. |
Miss Becky 2006-04-30 . chapter 1I've been trying to leave you a review for days now, and it seems like is finally back up!
I'm so glad to see you writing in this fandom again! You have such a lovely writing style, and a wonderfully dark Sands "voice." I really like his self-loathing here.
And I must admit I didn't get the riddle until you posted your second chapter. |
just jacs 2005-08-09 . chapter 1very well written very good! well done! |
Mahon 2004-06-12 . chapter 1Ouch. Angst. I loved this quite a bit however brief it is. |
Kate Swynford 2004-03-22 . chapter 1I loved it - sad, bitter, cruel and beautiful. |
bite the hand that feeds 2004-02-27 . chapter 1HI - I reviewed on sandsfic, but figured you might want the numbers :-D
I love anything original, and the structure just gets me.. anyway, I ramble, and you're probably starting to worry about the stalkage, but, yeah... nice one.
cheers x |